Question

10．"Please put your phone down Daddy，we haven't finished the story!"Hearing these heartfelt words from my four year old daughter was an uncomfortable wake up call．How had I let the shiny electronic box in my hand take so much of my attention that it could even interrupt a short bedtime story with my precious children？
It's no exaggeration to suggest that our mobile devices are in danger of taking over our entire lives．Time magazine found that 68% of users take their devices to bed with them，20% check their phones every ten minutes and one third report feeling anxious when briefly separated from their beloved gadget．According to Osterman research，79% of respondents take their work-related device on vacation and 33% admit to hiding from family and friends in order to check Facebook and Twitter．It's hard to deny that these are worrying trends．

【寫作內(nèi)容】用大約30字概括上文和圖表的主要內(nèi)容；
1 結(jié)合上述信息，用大約120字論述：
（1）科技的發(fā)展是否意味著人們生活更幸福．（選擇"是"或"否"并論述你的觀點）
（2）你認為在生活中應當如何處理人和科技的關系．
【寫作要求】
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句； 
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱； 
3．不必寫標題．

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)要求可知，1用大約30字概括上文和圖表的主要內(nèi)容；2 結(jié)合上述信息，用大約120字論述：（1）科技的發(fā)展是否意味著人們生活更幸福．（選擇"是"或"否"并論述你的觀點）（2）你認為在生活中應當如何處理人和科技的關系．注意可以適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，語句通順，同時注意正確運用時態(tài)語態(tài)，合理事業(yè)高級詞匯和高級句型．
亮點說明    A father's concern that smartphone is depriving him of his precious family time does not stand alone．句中運用了同位語從句
   However，no pains，no gains．使用諺語為文章增色
  The world evolves as human technology leaps forward，along whose process there is bound to be sacrifices．whose引導非限制性定語從句
  With digital devices booming around，we are given so many choices that our minds have been freed to a degree our ancestors could never anticipated．with的復合結(jié)構
  That being said，to make sure technology doesn't get in the way，you need to unplug from the information highway and share your journey with your family and friends from time to time．運用現(xiàn)在分詞作獨立主格結(jié)構

解答 A father's concern that smartphone is depriving him of his precious family time does not stand alone．（高分句型）Favorable opinions as there are，the majority of Americans today view technology as hazardous．（31 words）
【選"是"】However，no pains，no gains．The world evolves as human technology leaps forward，along whose process there is bound to be sacrifices．（高分句型）The definition of happiness may vary，but a more connected，convenient，and creative society is undeniably nothing a modern man wouldn't have desired．With digital devices booming around，we are given so many choices that our minds have been freed to a degree our ancestors could never anticipated．（高分句型）
That being said，to make sure technology doesn't get in the way，you need to unplug from the information highway and share your journey with your family and friends from time to time．（高分句型）A balance between man and computers will lead to an ultimate happiness．（115 words）
【選"否"】True，a high-tech world seems a new Eden，but it won't last any longer than the old one．Putting down their phones，lifting up their misty eyes，and waking up at night，people suddenly realize that，with all their family living by，they are alone．（高分句型）Children forgot how and why they should return their parents'love because it were never given； classic literature is left rotten on the shelves because no one bothers to look away from their screen．
To stop yourself getting"high"instead of"happy"，read a book，go outdoors，or simply pay a visit to your parents．（高分句型）There are things to pursue in life other than thumbing up tweets．Enjoy a tech-free day and see what real happiness means．（122 words）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．