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15．近年來(lái)許多名校成為旅游景點(diǎn)，這引起了廣泛的公眾關(guān)注．為此你班展開(kāi)有關(guān)"Should university campuses be open to tourists？"的討論．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給China Daily報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，介紹討論情況并發(fā)表白己的看法．

反對(duì)者	影響在校學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生，分散其注意力；大量游客涌入校園，會(huì)帶來(lái)安全隱患．
贊成者	拉近學(xué)生和社會(huì)距離，利于文化交流；一些大學(xué)已成為社會(huì)文明的象征，應(yīng)該讓人們?nèi)ジ惺苣抢锏臍夥眨?/TD>
你的建議/看法	…（至少談兩點(diǎn)）

注意：1．詞數(shù)：150左右．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；
2．短文須包括表中的全部?jī)?nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Editor，
Recent years have witnessed the fact that campuses of famous universities have become one of the popular tourist destinations，which has aroused great public concern．
                                                           
Best regards，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息討論"Should university campuses be open to tourists？"寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從反對(duì)者和贊成者及個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)三個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether the university campus should be open to tourists．（高分句型）
Worse still，with so many tourists entering the campuses，some safety problems will probably arise．（高分句型）
They insist that this can bring students and society closer together and is good for cultural exchange between people．（高分句型）Besides，some universities have become a symbol of social civilization and people should be allowed a chance to experience the atmosphere．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Editor，
     Recent years have witnessed the fact that campuses of famous universities have become one of the popular tourist destinations，which has aroused great public concern． I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether the university campus should be open to tourists．（高分句型）
    Some students argue that tourists should be denied access to university campuses．They think the tourists visiting the campuses will make it harder for students to focus on their studies．Worse still，with so many tourists entering the campuses，some safety problems will probably arise．（高分句型）
    However，others hold opposite opinions．They insist that this can bring students and society closer together and is good for cultural exchange between people．（高分句型）Besides，some universities have become a symbol of social civilization and people should be allowed a chance to experience the atmosphere．（高分句型）
    In my opinion，several factors should be considered before opening university campuses to tourists．First，campuses should only be open to tourists on weekends or during holidays．Second，the number of tourists should be strictly limited to guarantee safety．（150 words）
                                                      Best regards，
                                                        Li Hua

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