Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是某大學(xué)的學(xué)生許浙。你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部將選舉新一屆副主席，負(fù)責(zé)規(guī)劃、組織俱樂(lè)部的相關(guān)活動(dòng)。你欲參選。請(qǐng)按以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇精選演講稿。

1.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)介紹（如性格、特長(zhǎng)等）

2. 組織校內(nèi)活動(dòng)的感想（如舉辦講座等）；

3.組織校際交流活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦演講比賽等）

4.表達(dá)當(dāng)選的愿望或決心。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于100；請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校名稱；可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：vice president

Good afternoon, my dear friends.

My name is Xu Zhe.______________________________________________________________

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Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, my dear friends.

My name is Xu Zhe. It’s I who would like to run for the position, vice president of our school English club.

As is known to everyone, I once served as monitor in Junior school and won the top monitor in Junior 2, so I have strengths in management. In order to make our school life more abundant and colorful, I can manage to hold some interesting lectures and English parties. What’s more, I shall hold some competitions, such as a debate on how to study efficiently and an English speech contest to improve our ability to communicate with each other.

I’d appreciate it if I could be chosen; I will do whatever I can to lend a hand to others.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇演講稿寫(xiě)作，這篇演講稿主要是作者對(duì)于校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部選舉新一屆副主席，競(jìng)選而作的演講。演講的內(nèi)容主要包括個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)介紹、組織校內(nèi)活動(dòng)的感想、組織校際交流活動(dòng)的設(shè)想以及表達(dá)當(dāng)選的愿望或決心等，這些介紹、感想和愿望等，都應(yīng)該表達(dá)得具體而真實(shí)。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意多使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次�！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

It’s I who would like to run for the position, vice president of our school English club.使用who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。

As is known to everyone, I once served as monitor in Junior school and won the top monitor in Junior 2, so I have strengths in management.使用so引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。最后一句I will do whatever I can to lend a hand to others.使用whatever 引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。這些高級(jí)句型的使用，使得文章的水平更加高級(jí)。serve as，In order to，manage to，What’s more，such as等詞組的使用，使得文章更加生動(dòng)。run for the position，won the top monitor，make our school life more abundant and colorful，hold some interesting lectures and English parties，

lend a hand to others等短語(yǔ)的使用，使得文章表達(dá)更加準(zhǔn)確和到位，也為文章增添了活潑氣氛。開(kāi)頭部分：簡(jiǎn)明扼要的說(shuō)明自己的演講目標(biāo)。正文部分：講述自己曾經(jīng)擔(dān)任班長(zhǎng)和組織英語(yǔ)演講等活動(dòng)，說(shuō)明自己競(jìng)選的努力。結(jié)尾部分：表達(dá)自己希望被選中的愿望和以及被選中之后的決心。