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【題目】近年來，隨著清明節(jié)(the Tomb-sweeping Festival)、端午節(jié)(the Dragon Boat Festival)、中秋節(jié)(Mid-Autumn Day)等傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日成為法定假日越來越多的人選擇“自駕游(self-driving travel)”作為假期出游的首選。

請你根據(jù)以下提示，以“My Views on Self-driving Travel”為題寫一篇短文：

1.自駕游增加的原因（至少兩條）；

2.自駕游的優(yōu)勢及缺點；

3.自駕游的注意事項；

注意： 詞數(shù)100--120；

可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

My Views on Self-driving Travel

Recently, as traditional Chinese festivals, such as the Tomb-sweeping Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival and the Mid-Autumn Day become official holidays, self-driving travel has become people’s preference in traveling.

The reasons why more and more people choose it are as follows. On the one hand, the economic development has made it possible for more people to buy their own private cars. On the other hand, health-conscious people focus more on the quality of their life, so they will grasp every chance to enjoy their life.

As every coin has two sides, self-driving travel is not an exception. While providing people with more chances to travel together with their family and friends, self-driving travel may also result in some problems, such as the traffic jams on the high way or even the expressway.

Since people have to drive all the way during the tour, they have to pay special attention to the safety problem and avoid driving when exhausted.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語such as比如；as follows如下；result in導致；On the other hand另一方面；pay special attention to注意；The reasons why more and more people choose it are as follows這個句子why引導the reason的定語從句；While providing people with more chances to travel together with their family and friends, self-driving travel may also result in some problems,這個句子providing是狀語從句的省略；