19.假定英語課課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞.
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
My grandpa used to be a teacher who is retired now.he has been living the busy and active life,going online,writing articles for newspapers,but attending academic conferences all over the country.He also had many bobbies,such as growing flowers at home,collecting stamps and coins,and especial drinking tea.There are various tea sets and almost all kinds tea in his home,most of that I can't name.
My grandpa is so very crazy about tea that he can't live with enjoying tea several times a day.He once told me he would be sleepy without tea.I often help making tea and drink together with me.I love my grandpa.

分析 本文主要講述作者爺爺過著忙碌和積極的生活,上網(wǎng),為報(bào)紙寫稿,出席學(xué)術(shù)會(huì)議.也有許多愛好,如種花,集郵和錢幣,特別是飲茶.因此,作者時(shí)常幫著沏茶和他一起飲茶.

解答 My grandpa used to be a teacher who is retired now.he has been living the busy and active life,going online,writing articles for newspapers,but attending academic conferences all over the country.He also had many bobbies,such as growing flowers at home,collecting stamps and coins,and especial drinking tea.There are various tea sets and almost all kinds∧tea in his home,most of that I can't name.
My grandpa is so very crazy about tea that he can't live with enjoying tea several times a day.He once told me he would be sleepy without tea.I often help making tea and drink together with me.I love my grandpa.
詳解:
1.the改為a 考查冠詞.live a life意為"過日子",是固定搭配.
2.but改為and/or 考查連詞.going online,writing articles for newspapers和attending academic conferences all over the country是現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語,是并列關(guān)系或選擇關(guān)系,用連詞and/or.
3.had改為has 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài).此處講述的是一般事實(shí),用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).
4.especial改為especially 考查副詞.a(chǎn)ttend是動(dòng)詞,要用副詞修飾.
5.加of 考查固定搭配.a(chǎn)ll kinds of意為"各種各類的",是固定搭配.
6 that改為which 考查定語從句.分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句,先行詞various tea sets and almost all kinds of tea在從句中作介詞of的賓語,用關(guān)系代詞which,介詞后不接關(guān)系代詞that.
7.去掉very 考查副詞.so…that…意為"如此/這么…以致于…",句型中的so是副詞,常常用來修飾形容詞或副詞,常用句型為:主語+謂語+so+adj./adv.+that從句.已有副詞so修飾crazy,very是多余的,要去掉.
8.with改為without 考查介詞.根據(jù)句意:每天他不喝幾次茶不能活.用介詞without.
9.making改為make 考查動(dòng)詞不定式.help do sth.意為"幫助做某事",help后接不帶to的動(dòng)詞不定式.
10.me改為him 考查代詞.根據(jù)句意:我時(shí)常幫著沏茶和他一起飲茶.用代詞him.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文,短文故事,書信等,具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性.短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際,從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作.首先,通讀全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯,在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好,再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò).其次,要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò).這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意.最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍,檢查答案是否正確,感覺是否還有不妥之處,最終形成定稿.

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