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4．假設(shè)你是李華，校英文報(bào)舉行題為"我最喜歡的幽默大師---卓別林"的征文比賽，請你投稿參賽．
要點(diǎn)：
1．簡要介紹卓別林；
2．談?wù)勀阆矚g他的原因．
要求：
行文流暢，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右．
Charlie Chaplin，master of nonverbal humor，was born into a poor family．When he was young，his father died，leaving the family even worse off．Therefore，Charlie had to take the responsibility to care for his mother and brother．Even if he led a hard life，he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters，such as the littletramp，who encouraged many people in need．（高分句型一）
The reasons why I likeChaplin best are listed as follows．（高分句型二）Firstly，he worked hard to achieve his dream．Secondly，he had a sense of humor and was good at making a bad situation entertaining．What's more，his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble．（高分句型三）
In general，I have learnt a lot from Charlie Chaplin．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇人物類命題作文．聯(lián)系題干，以此為中心內(nèi)容進(jìn)行選材．考生在寫這篇文章時(shí)，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：
1．要分析題干，圍繞題干進(jìn)行選材，在寫作思路方面，題目要求寫幽默大師卓別林，所以我們可以將他的外形、性格還有代表作簡要介紹一下．
2．要點(diǎn)要齊全，將題目要求的內(nèi)容羅列完整，重點(diǎn)對他進(jìn)行簡要介紹并列明喜歡他的主要原因，要注意層次結(jié)構(gòu)，注意上下文的銜接．
3．注意時(shí)態(tài)與語態(tài)，全文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，描述第三人時(shí)要注意動(dòng)詞形態(tài)的使用．
【范文亮點(diǎn)】


1．文章采用了have to do sth不得不做某事；take the responsibility擔(dān)負(fù)責(zé)任；manage to do設(shè)法做成某事；the reason why…的原因；等高級(jí)表達(dá)；
2．文章采用了"Therefore、In general、What's more、Even if"等連接詞使文章更加層次，連貫通順．
3．who encouraged many people in need，在句中，出現(xiàn)了who引導(dǎo)的定語從句．
Even if he led a hard life，he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters，such as the little tramp，who encouraged many people in need．（高分句型一）
The reasons why I like Chaplin best are listed as follows．（高分句型二）
What's more，his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble．（高分句型三）

解答 Charlie Chaplin，master of nonverbal humor，was born into a poor family．When he was young，his father died，leaving the family even worse off．Therefore，Charlie had to take the responsibility to care for his mother and brother．Even if he led a hard life，he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters，such as the little tramp，who encouraged many people in need．（高分句型一）
      The reasons why I like Chaplin best are listed as follows．（高分句型二）Firstly，he worked hard to achieve his dream．Secondly，he had a sense of humor and was good at making a bad situation entertaining．What's more，his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble．（高分句型三）
       In general，I have learnt a lot from Charlie Chaplin．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．