Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Today was Sunday, and I was so pleasing because our family had a bigger gathering. We went to the park to having a barbecue. Since the family members hadn’t got together with a long time, so my father decided to organize a family gathering. In the park, I played with cousins. We were visiting the park while our parents were doing a barbecue. When my cousins and I was tired, we went to join the grown-ups’ activities. We share our lives while eating. I like this activity so much that I hope my family can have more times together.

Answer 1

【答案】1. pleasing →pleased

2. bigger → big

3. having →have

4. (with a long time) with→ for

5.so 去掉

6.(play with cousins) cousins 前加 my

7. (doing a barbecue) a → the

8. (and I was tied) was → were

9. share → shared

10.times → time

【解析】文章講述了周末全家公園大聚會，大聚餐的情境。

1. pleasing →pleased 考查相似詞。pleasing “令人愉快的”常修飾物；pleased“高興的”常修飾人。此處修飾主語I用pleased，故pleasing →pleased.

2. bigger → big 考查形容詞。此處指我們家有一個大聚會，并沒有比較的意思用形容詞原級，故bigger → big.

3. having →have考查動詞。此處是不定式作目的狀語，指我們?nèi)ス珗@烤肉。to后動詞用原形，故having →have.

4. (with a long time) with→ for 考查介詞。用于完成時表示一段時間，介詞用for不用with，故with→ for.

5.so 去掉。考查連詞。英語中表示因果的連詞不能同時使用，只能用一個。句中已經(jīng)使用了Since就不能用so，故so 去掉。

6.(play with cousins) cousins 前加 my .考查代詞。此處修飾cousins指我的兄弟姐妹，要加形容詞性物主代詞，故cousins 前加 my .

7. (doing a barbecue) a → the .考查冠詞。上文已經(jīng)提到having a barbecue.，此處再次提到用定冠詞，故a → the .

8. (and I was tied) was → were .考查主謂一致。從句主語是my cousins and I是復(fù)數(shù)，動詞也要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故was → were .

9. share → shared.考查時態(tài)。全文描述發(fā)生過去的一件事，都是過去時態(tài)。此處也用過去時，故share → shared.

10.times → time.考查名詞。times“時代，次數(shù)”，此處表示“時間”是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)。故times → time.