【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每次錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Bertha was a very pretty girl. Quite a lot young men wanted to marry with her, but she was not satisfied with any of them. One day, one of the young man came to visit her and asked her to become his wife. She answered, “No, John, I don't marry you. I want to marry a man who is famous, who can play music instrument and can sing and dance very good, who can tell interested stories, who does not smoke or drink ,who stay at home in the evenings, who stops talking when I'm tired of listening.” The young man got up, took his coat and went to the door, however, before he left the house, he turned and said to Bertha, “It isn't a man you're looking for. It's a television set.”

【答案】

【1】lot 后加of

【2】去掉with

【3】men

【4】don’t 改為won’t

【5】instruments

【6】well

【7】interesting

【8】stays

【9】加and

【10】however改為but

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，講述了挑剔的Bertha拒絕一位年輕人的求婚，并講述了自己的理想結(jié)婚對(duì)象的條件。

【1】lot 后加of 考查形容詞短語(yǔ)。短語(yǔ)a lot of許多，大量；該詞既可以修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)也可以修飾不可數(shù)名詞。句意：很多男人都想娶她，但是她對(duì)他們都不滿意。

【2】去掉with 考查動(dòng)詞用法。動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)marry sb娶某人，嫁給某人；這是一個(gè)及物動(dòng)詞，后面直接加賓語(yǔ)，不需要介詞。

【3】men 考查名單復(fù)數(shù)。短語(yǔ)one of...的后面要加可數(shù)復(fù)數(shù)形式，表示“...之一”。句意：一天，其中的一個(gè)年輕人來(lái)看她并向她求婚。

【4】don’t 改為won’t 考查時(shí)態(tài)。對(duì)象向她求婚，她表示拒絕“我不會(huì)嫁給你”，這是未來(lái)的事情，所以使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

【5】instruments 考查名詞用法。本句中使用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式instruments表示“樂(lè)器”這一類事物。

【6】well 考查副詞。在英語(yǔ)中形容詞通常作為定語(yǔ)或表語(yǔ)，而副詞通常作為狀語(yǔ)。本句中使用副詞well修飾動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)sing and dace。

【7】interesting 考查形容詞用法。在英語(yǔ)中形容詞通常作為定語(yǔ)或表語(yǔ)，而副詞通常作為狀語(yǔ)。本句中使用interesting“令人感興趣的”修飾story，而interested“感興趣的”修飾人。句意：他能夠講很有趣的故事。

【8】stays 考查主謂一致。本句是定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞who指代先行詞a man，先行詞是一個(gè)單數(shù)名詞，所以定語(yǔ)從句中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也應(yīng)該使用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。

【9】加and 考查連詞。在多個(gè)并列結(jié)構(gòu)的最后兩個(gè)之間，要使用并列連詞and連接。

【10】however改為but 考查連詞。副詞however是不能連接兩個(gè)句子的，雖然本句表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，但本句需要一個(gè)連詞but連接兩個(gè)句子。

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