Question

【題目】Many people in England are angry that drivers park their cars on the pavements. Cars that are on the pavement prevent people from walking safely down the street. They have to walk into the road to get around the running cars. It’s a lot more difficult for blind people to walk around the town if cars are in their way. A spokesman for a charity told the BBC, “It can be frightening for anyone who is forced to step into a road because the pavement is blocked by a van, car or other badly parked vehicle. Imagine you have to step into a road where you can’t see oncoming traffic.”

A survey on parking in Britain found that 70 percent of people want a ban on parking on pavements. A town south of London has already started a system to get drivers to park in a proper car park. Any motorist who parks on the pavement gets a $115 fine. However, many people say the fines do not work. Local people say car owners ignore the fine and park where they want. One woman said there would soon be a very serious accident because of a car parked on the pavement. She wants her town to be like London, which has strict rules against pavement parking.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．用約30個單詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；

2．用約120個單詞就“人行道停車”談?wù)勀愕目捶�，�?nèi)容包括：

(1)分析駕駛員在人行道上停車的原因；

(2)簡述人行道停車給行人帶來的不便；

(3)你對解決該問題有何建議？

【寫作要求】

1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3．不必寫標(biāo)題。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】In England, many vehicles are parked on the pavements, which results in much inconvenience to pedestrians, especially to blind people. Therefore, many people call for more strict rules against pavement parking.

In my opinion, the problem of pavement parking is a universal phenomenon. With people’s incomes growing, there has been a sharp increase in the number of vehicles. Since there is such a severe lack of parking places, many drivers couldn’t find proper places to park their vehicles. As a result, they can’t help but park their vehicles on the pavements.

However, pavement parking does cause much inconvenience to pedestrians, especially to those disabled people. They are forced to step into the roads, which is likely to cause accidents.

To solve this problem, I suggest that more parking places should be built in the downtown areas to meet the need of drivers. Besides, drivers are also supposed to be considerate and not to park their vehicles on the pavement. In the end, one can choose to go out by bus or on foot if he expects the traffic is very busy.

【解析】讀寫類作文首先需要先閱讀材料，然后根據(jù)要求進行寫作，第一段要用約30個單詞概括材料的主要內(nèi)容，材料主要講的是在英國人行道停車的問題及帶來的不好的影響；然后要求對此談?wù)勛约旱目捶�，包括以下幾點：(1)分析駕駛員在人行道上停車的原因；(2)簡述人行道停車給行人帶來的不便；(3)你對解決該問題有何建議？寫作要注意以下幾點：1. 文章主要談對人行道停車的看法，應(yīng)適合用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。2. 內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)提示，但是不要對要點進行簡單的羅列。可以使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。

【范文亮點】

1. many vehicles are parked on the pavements, which results in much inconvenience to pedestrians，especially to blind people. Which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。

2. With people’s incomes growing, there has been a sharp increase in the number of vehicles. With的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。

3. To solve this problem, I suggest that more parking places should be built in the downtown areas to meet the need of drivers. 不定式作目的狀語以及that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。

4. In the end, one can choose to go out by bus or on foot if he expects the traffic is very busy. If引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句。