Question

19．根據(jù)下面的漫畫，聯(lián)系生活實際，寫一篇150詞左右的英語作文．

Answer 1

分析 本書面表達是一篇圖畫類的寫作，要求考生展開關(guān)于懶惰和天分的討論．要仔細觀察分析圖畫的畫面，按照圖意提示寫作．并且寫作時注意句子的銜接，適當使用連詞．同時考生還要注意的是在寫作過程中所運用的時態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．除此以外，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時學到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語：
have a strong desire to do 渴望做某事，end in…以..告終，play a very important role in…在..中起到很重要的作用，
高分句子：
1．However，regretfully，he is firmly fastened to his original position by the nature of laziness and certainly achieves nothing．本句中副詞 regretfully做插入語的使用，豐富了句子結(jié)構(gòu)．
2．Only by working hard and practicing a lot are we able to overcome difficulties and achieve our goals．only位于句首，主句進行倒裝，本句是亮點句型．

解答 In the cartoon，the man enjoys being clever and wishes to do a great job．However，regretfully，he is firmly fastened to his original position by the nature of laziness and certainly achieves nothing（描述畫面）．
  In fact，you can see many such examples in life．Just as the old saying goes，diligence leads to success while laziness results in failure（引用諺語）．Every task requires hard work，from learning English to building a house．Some of my classmates are definitely clever，and they have a strong desire to go to a famous university，but unfortunately，they are wasting time talking or playing．And consequently，they end in failure（舉例說明）．
  Therefore，in my opinion，diligence plays a very important role in life．Only by working hard and practicing a lot are we able to overcome difficulties and achieve our goals（高分句子）．No one can succeed just by thinking without any actions（發(fā)表自己看法總結(jié)全文）．

點評 半開放性作文留給考生發(fā)揮的空間比較大．一般只提供一個話題或一個圖片，要求考生合理地進行想象．考生在寫作時，需要做到以下幾點：第一、認真審題，把握所有信息．第二、確定體裁，把握行文格式．第三、羅列提綱，思考表達方式．第四、組織語言，展開寫作． 寫作時，運用熟悉的英語詞匯、句型等；要盡量運用多樣化的句式，注意長短句的結(jié)合、簡單句和復合句的結(jié)合；要注意上下文的銜接，過渡要自然．第五、認真檢查，查漏補缺．