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Many moved stories remain deep in people’s heart to this day. In 2008 a terrible earthquake strike Wenchuan, there many people lost their lives and homes. After the earthquake under a fallen building, a mother as well as her baby were found by some soldiers. When the soldiers were ready to take them away, they surprised to find the baby in the mother’s arms still alive. The baby was sleeping but wasn’t hurt at all. Between the dead mother and the living baby, there was a cell phone with a short message on the screen. It read, “Don’t worry, my baby. Mom is for you. If you can survive, don’t forget that I love you.”

The story moved many people deep, including me. I couldn’t hold back my tears when I read these word. One is great if he loves others when he is in the danger.

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本文是一篇記敘文。許多感人的故事至今仍深深地留在人們的心中。文章講述了汶川地震時感人的故事。文章告訴我們“一個人如果在危險的時候愛別人，那他就是偉大的。”

1.考查情感動詞-ed和-ing的用法。句意：許多感人的故事至今仍深植于人們的心中。情感形容詞，-ed形式通常修飾“人”；-ing形式通常修飾“物”，故把moved改成moving。

2.考查一般過去時態(tài)。句意：2008年汶川大地震，許多人失去了生命和家園。根據(jù)2008可知句子用一般過去時態(tài)，故把strike改成struck。

3.考查定語從句。句意：2008年汶川大地震，許多人失去了生命和家園。此處Wenchuan做先行詞，在后面的定語從句中作地點狀語，故把there改成where。

4.考查主謂一致。句意：一位母親和她的孩子被一些士兵發(fā)現(xiàn)了。此處as well as連接兩個主語，后面的謂語動詞遵循就遠原則，故把were改成was。

5.考查被動語態(tài)。句意：當士兵們準備把他們帶走時，他們驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)嬰兒還活著，躺在母親的懷里。be surprised to do sth.“感到吃驚地做某事”，此處是過去的事情，且句子主語they是復數(shù)形式，故在they后加were。

6.考查并列連詞。句意：嬰兒正在睡覺，一點也沒有受傷。此處是并列的遞進關(guān)系，故把but改成and。

7.考查介詞。句意：媽媽和你在一起。be with“和------在一起”，故把for改成with。

8.考查副詞。句意：這個故事深深地感動了很多人，包括我。此處表示抽象概念“深深地”，故把deep改成deeply。

9.考查名詞復數(shù)。根據(jù)these可知后面的名詞用復數(shù)形式，故把word改成words。

10.考查固定搭配。句意：一個人如果在危險的時候愛別人，那他就是偉大的。固定搭配：in danger“在危險中”，故把the去掉。

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