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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有

10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（八），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My father and I stayed at Bai Shan Hotel for a week when we visit Yanji last month. It is in the

downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free

high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for

my friends many photos taking in Yanji. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we

enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that l will recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Yanji.

Answer 1

【答案】Last month my brother and I visited Nanjing and westayat the Central Hotel for a

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【解析】試題分析：這是一篇記敘文，講的是作者去南京旅游，住了一家非常棒的旅館，最愛的還是旅館里的高速網(wǎng)絡(luò)。并向要去南京旅游的推薦了這家旅館。

【1】stay改成stayed考察動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。stay跟前面的visited屬于并列成分，所以都要有過去時(shí)態(tài)。故把stay改成stayed。

【2】but改成so/and考察連詞。but表示轉(zhuǎn)折，用來連接前后相反的意思，但這句話明顯是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，或者因果關(guān)系。意思是它在市中心，所以/并且去……很方便。故把but改成so/and。

【3】去掉anywhere前面的to考察介詞。anywhere是副詞，副詞前不加介詞，故把to去掉。

【4】comfortable前加a考察冠詞。comfortable double-room是名詞，前面要跟a來修飾。故把comfortable前加a。

【5】That改成What考察關(guān)系代詞。What I liked best was……中的What I liked best是個(gè)主語從句，what作為該從句的關(guān)系代詞。故把That改成What。

【6】message改成messages考察名詞。message是可數(shù)名詞，并且前面有many修飾，所以用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故把message改成messages。

【7】for改成with考察介詞。share with sb.固定搭配，意思是和某人分享。故把for改成with。

【8】taking改成taken考察分詞做后置定語。photos taken in Nanjing是個(gè)定語從句，省略了which is, photos (which is) taken in Nanjing。故把taking改成taken。

【9】wonderfully改成wonderful考察形容詞。was后面跟形容詞作表語。故把wonderfully改成wonderful。

【10】me改成mine考察名詞性物主代詞。friend of mine，mine指的是my friend。避免重復(fù)就用物主代詞mine代替。故把me改成mine。