Question

【題目】學校即將舉辦“讀書節(jié)”，目前正廣泛征集“讀書節(jié)”宣傳冊圖片。假設你是該校學生潘陽，你已找到以下三幅圖片，決定給讀書節(jié)組委會寫一封信，推薦其中一幅，你的信須包括以下內容：

1. 簡單描述你想推薦的那幅圖片；

2. 闡述你用這幅圖片宣傳“讀書節(jié)”的理由。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.

In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Pan Yang

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達陳述觀點及理由。

寫作時注意以下幾點：

1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確從以上三張圖片中選擇一張。

2、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。但是在以具體事例闡述的時候使用過去時

3、注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。

運用定語從句a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.; a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration; your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well；My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book；

運用連詞 Though,

運用副詞 deeply 修飾impressed

運用了賓語從句discussing heatedly what they have just read；It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion; Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story; it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity；I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration

此外，文章還使用了大量習語和短語，如not only …but also; as far as I’m concerned; To sum up ; share with; 等。