6．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文．短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Last weekend，after pay a visit to the city of New York，I visited the Smithsonian Institutions National Air and Space Museum，where lies in Washington，D．C．
The museum，which covers a area of 18，000 square meters，is made of 24 exhibition halls．All kinds of planes，rockets，missiles and spaceship of great importance and variously old instruments that famous pilots and astronauts used are on display．In addition，I see copies of some satellites and aircraft．More interestingly，I tried operating on some aircraft by myself．During the visit，I took lots of pictures as well．
This brief visit helped myself learn much about the history of human's space exploration．It made me more interesting in science and technology．

分析 本文主要講述作者參觀了太空博物館．看到了各種各樣的飛機(jī)，火箭，導(dǎo)彈和太空飛船等．此外，作者還親自操作了航空器．簡(jiǎn)短的參觀幫助作者更多地了解了人類探索太空的歷史．

解答 Last weekend，after pay a visit to the city of New York，I visited the Smithsonian Institutions National Air and Space Museum，where lies in Washington，D．C．
The museum，which covers a area of 18，000 square meters，is made∧of 24 exhibition halls．All kinds of planes，rockets，missiles and spaceship of great importance and variously old instruments that famous pilots and astronauts used are on display．In addition，I see copies of some satellites and aircraft．More interestingly，I tried operating on some aircraft by myself．During the visit，I took lots of pictures as well．
This brief visit helped myself learn much about the history of human's space exploration．It made me more interesting in science and technology．
詳解：
1．pay改為paying 考查動(dòng)名詞．a(chǎn)fter是介詞，后接動(dòng)詞時(shí)用動(dòng)名詞形式．
2．where改為which 考查定語(yǔ)從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞Space Museum在從句中作主語(yǔ)，用關(guān)系代詞which．
3．a(chǎn)改為an 考查冠詞．a(chǎn)rea是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指，因其讀音以發(fā)元音開頭，用不定冠詞an．
4．加up 考查固定搭配．be made up of意為"由…組成"，是固定搭配．
5．spaceship改為spaceships 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．spaceship是可數(shù)名詞，此處表示不止一艘，用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
6．variously改為various 考查形容詞．instruments是名詞，要用形容詞修飾．
7．see改為saw 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．全文講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
8．去掉on 考查詞語(yǔ)用法．operate作"操作"講時(shí)是及物動(dòng)詞，后接賓語(yǔ)時(shí)不需要介詞．
9．myself改為me 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：簡(jiǎn)短的參觀幫助我更多地了解了人類探索太空的歷史．用代詞me．
10．interesting改為interested 考查過去分詞．be interested in意為"對(duì)…感興趣"，此處是過去分詞短語(yǔ)interested inscience and technology作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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