Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Peter想抓住中國“一帶一路”經(jīng)濟合作戰(zhàn)略的大好時機到中國來創(chuàng)業(yè)，現(xiàn)寫信向你咨詢有關事宜，請你根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封回信：

1. 你對此事的看法；

2. 給出幾點建議（如：學漢語，了解中國文化等）并說明理由；

3. 表達祝愿。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯: 一帶一路the Belt and Road; 合作戰(zhàn)略cooperative strategy

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am more than delighted to know that you are coming to China to set up your own business. It’s really a wise choice to take advantage of the Belt and Road economic cooperation strategy of China. Here are some useful tips for you.

To begin with, you are supposed to learn some Chinese so that you can communicate with Chinese better when you are in China. Besides, it is also beneficial for you to learn about some Chinese culture and traditions, which will assist you to have a better understanding of China. Just as an old proverb goes, “When you are in Rome, do as the Romans do.” More importantly, if I were you, I would surf the Internet to get more basic information about Chinese economic policies. Only in this way can you make a specific and practical plan.

I would appreciate it very much if you could take my suggestions into account. I hope you’ll find these suggestions useful. May you succeed in your further business. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，表達對Peter抓住中國“一帶一路”經(jīng)濟合作戰(zhàn)略的時機來中國來創(chuàng)業(yè)的看法，并給出幾點建議，以及表達對Peter的祝愿。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結構：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。

要求：1.表達對Peter抓住中國“一帶一路”經(jīng)濟合作戰(zhàn)略的時機來中國來創(chuàng)業(yè)的看法；

2.給出幾點建議并說明理由；

3.表達對Peter的祝愿。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

set up; business; take advantage of; the Belt and Road; cooperation strategy; To begin with; be supposed to do; so that; communicate with; Besides; learn about; assist; have a better understanding of; surf the Internet; make plan; succeed in.

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am more than delighted to know that you are coming to China to set up your own business.

2. It’s really a wise choice to take advantage of the Belt and Road economic cooperation strategy of China.

3. you are supposed to learn some Chinese so that you can communicate with Chinese better when you are in China.

4. it is also beneficial for you to learn about some Chinese culture and traditions, which will assist you to have a better understanding of China.

5. Just as an old proverb goes, “When you are in Rome, do as the Romans do.”

6. if I were you, I would surf the Internet to get more basic information about Chinese economic policies.

7. I would appreciate it very much if you could take my suggestions into account.

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改