Question

4．假如你是李明，學(xué)校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)和教師因?yàn)閾?dān)心同學(xué)們?yōu)g覽不健康的網(wǎng)站，關(guān)閉了教室內(nèi)電腦的網(wǎng)絡(luò)瀏覽功能，你們感到很難過(guò)．請(qǐng)你給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，勸說(shuō)校長(zhǎng)同意開(kāi)通教室內(nèi)的網(wǎng)絡(luò)．
注意：
1．信中要包括下表中的所有內(nèi)容；
2．詞數(shù)：120左右；
3．（答題卷）信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4．參考詞匯：sense of judgment（判斷力）

事由	教室內(nèi)的電腦不能上網(wǎng)，建議學(xué)校開(kāi)通網(wǎng)絡(luò)．
原因	1．有利于查找資料； 2．瀏覽新聞，了解信息； 3．作為高中生，我們正在形成自己的判斷力．

Dear Headmaster，
I'm writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom．
                                                          ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封信勸說(shuō)校長(zhǎng)同意開(kāi)通教室內(nèi)的網(wǎng)絡(luò)．本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題．通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少．動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．
We knFirst of all，we can surf the Internet for a wide range of learning resources in a short time without working hard in the library．（高分句型）
Furthermore，during the lunchtime，we can communicate with our foreign friends，sharing our experiences，cultures and studies through the Internet．（高分句型）
 We know you're afraid that we may be exposed to unhealthy websites or spend too much time playing games online．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Headmaster，
     I'm writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom．We know you're afraid that we may be exposed to unhealthy websites or spend too much time playing games online．（高分句型） Personally，I think surfing the Internet can bring us much more advantages．
     First of all，we can surf the Internet for a wide range of learning resources in a short time without working hard in the library．（高分句型）Furthermore，during the lunchtime，we can communicate with our foreign friends，sharing our experiences，cultures and studies through the Internet．（高分句型）This way，we can improve our language skills by chatting online．Last but not least，as high school students，we are old and wise enough to tell right from wrong．Believe in us and we will learn how to stay away from unhealthy websites．
     I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and let us get access to the Internet at school．（高分句型）
     Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞．最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤．