Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是李華，你的好友王琳代表你們班參加市里舉行的中學(xué)生英語口語競(jìng)賽并獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你用英語給她寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容要包括以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.對(duì)她的成功表示祝賀；

2.說明她取得成功的原因；

3.請(qǐng)她告訴你學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；

2.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Wang Lin,

I’m just so glad to hear that you have won the–first prize in the Oral English Competition

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Lin,

I’m just so glad to hear that you have won the–first prize in the Oral English Competition.

It’s really good news for us and we are all proud of you. Congratulations on your success and best wishes for your future progress in English!

As we all know, it’s not easy to get such a great achievement as so many good students took part in it. You are really outstanding. You are always working hard and your success proves that diligence can bring fruitful results. Your success has set a good model for us all. We are looking forward to seeing you in the classroom and we want you to give us a report on how to learn English well. As you know, I’m not good at English, so I’m eager to improve my English by learning from your experience. I’ll be grateful for your kind help!

Congratulations again!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇半開放性的書信類作文。

在寫作時(shí)要注意一下幾點(diǎn);

1. 格式要正確。書信的格式要求前面有抬頭，后面有落款。

2. 時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確。通過審題可知本文的主體時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。而且采用第一人稱。

3. 要點(diǎn)要明確。要求中的三點(diǎn)都要有所涉及。在成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)發(fā)明有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使文章更豐滿。

4. 結(jié)構(gòu)要緊湊。恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂肁s we all know, As you know 等過渡性性詞匯使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

5. 書寫要美觀。