【題目】據(jù)報(bào)道，在我國(guó)仍有很多山區(qū)的孩子因?yàn)榧彝ヘ毟F而上不起學(xué)。你們班就如何幫助這些孩子上學(xué)進(jìn)行了討論。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你把你們的建議寫成一封信寄給《學(xué)生周報(bào)》的編輯。

建議要點(diǎn)：

收集舊課本和衣服

呼吁更多人幫助他們

你的建議, 至少一條

要求：1. 100 詞左右 2. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high school student.

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We’ll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly, increase public awareness of the poor children’s living conditions and call on more people to help them.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high school student. It’s reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can’t go to school because of poverty. Last week, our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood.

Here are our suggestions. First, some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused by them. Second, it’s also very important to appeal to more people and social organizations to help and care for those poor children. As far as I’m concerned, we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those children in need. Above all, we should give them respect, never looking down upon them because they are poor.

We’ll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly, increase public awareness of the poor children’s living conditions and call on more people to help them.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文運(yùn)用了一些常見的短語(yǔ)care for照顧；As far as I’m concerned就我而言；look down upon瞧不起；First, some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused by them這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用so that因此，表示結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)；We’ll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly, increase public awareness of the poor children’s living conditions and call on more people to help them.這個(gè)句子it做形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)是后面的if引導(dǎo)的從句；

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