Question

【題目】人們對待機遇有不同的態(tài)度，請以“Opportunities favour the prepared mind”為題，按要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章，要點如下：

對待機遇的態(tài)度	結(jié)果	你的觀點
夢想著成功，卻遲遲沒有行動，等著天上掉餡餅	只能看著機遇從身邊悄悄溜走	（請舉例說明）
默默努力著，為機遇的到來做好充分準備	最終迎來成功的喜悅

注意：1.可參照以上內(nèi)容適當發(fā)揮；

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

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Answer 1

【答案】Opportunities favour the prepared mind

There are two kinds of people taking completely different attitudes to building a bright future.One is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future,but without any action,while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared.

The message conveyed above is crystal clear: Opportunities favour the prepared mind.The difference between the two lies only in the way each treats opportunities.Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities.Unsuccessful people,on the other hand,work little and just wait,seeing them pass by.

To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities,let’s take the Chinese diver Wu Minxia for example.In order to win the gold medal in the Olympics,she trained hard day after day and eventually made it. Therefore,we should make efforts to make our dreams come true.It’s universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts.(152)

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，文章要點已經(jīng)給出，在寫這篇文章時要注意以下幾點：

1.整篇文章時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。

2.要點要齊全，但是不要進行簡單的羅列，可以采用適當?shù)倪B接詞，或者是表遞進關(guān)系的副詞如therefore使上下文銜接自然，行文自然流暢。

3.注意語氣，此文是寫給自己的英語短文，所以語氣上應該比較平和，不應該出現(xiàn)過多的強硬語氣的詞語。

4. 注意文章要以一定的邏輯順序進行敘述，一定要把各方觀點敘述清楚，細節(jié)把控要到位。否則會顯得說服力不夠，內(nèi)容不夠豐滿。

【范文亮點】

提綱性文章難點：提綱性文章難點：擴充成句，因為提綱性文章主題內(nèi)容已經(jīng)基本列出，在將短句擴充時，要精煉。其中要注意盡量用高級詞匯和復雜句是來表達，如強調(diào)句，定語從句等，就如文中It’s universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts. 使用的是定語從句。再者就是要多使用一些高級詞匯與詞組，如be dreaming of，devote to， make preparations to， pass by，In order to ， make efforts to等。最后就是要段落清新，層次分明。就像文中要多使用一些連接詞語使銜接自然。