閱讀下面短文,然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Many students in the colleges and universities are found taking no notice of the waste of water, electricity or paper.
Very few students use washbasins when washing faces. Some schoolgirls do not turn off the taps when putting the facial cream on their faces, leaving the water flow away. There is a phenomenon which can often be seen in students’ public washrooms. A basin of clothes is put under a tap which is turned on at the maximum, and the water in the basin is spilling over, but there is no one in the washroom. The owner of the clothes comes back and pours out half of the water in the basin.
The same thing happens in the use of electricity in the colleges and universities. During supper time, all the lights are turned on. However, there are only several or even no students in the classroom, which can hold over a hundred students. At night, some of the dormitories are locked, but the lights are still on inside. Quite a few students explain themselves that they don’t have to pay the extra electricity cost even if they overuse it because they have paid the school fee already.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2. 以約120個(gè)詞就“學(xué)生應(yīng)增強(qiáng)節(jié)約能源意識”這個(gè)話題發(fā)表你的看法,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:
(1) 學(xué)生增強(qiáng)節(jié)約能源意識的必要性;
(2) 你認(rèn)為生活中如何做到節(jié)約能源。
【寫作要求】
作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,語篇連貫。
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Lots of students in the colleges and universities pay no attention to the waste of water, electricity and paper, which causes a large amount of energy to be wasted.
The waste and overuse of energy has influenced ecological balance, which will have a harmful effect on our environment. It is necessary for us students to enhance the awareness of saving energy.
Personally, I think we can save much energy in our daily life. First, we can walk or ride bicycles to school. If schools are too far away from our homes, we can take buses instead of taking private cars or taxis. Second, we should write on both sides of paper. Besides, we can take reusable bags with us when shopping. Fourth, we can save electricity by turning off the lights or other electrical appliances when we sleep or leave the rooms. In addition, we can reuse the water after washing to clean the toilets.
In a word, as long as we make efforts, a lot of energy can be saved and the environment can be protected.
【解析】
試題分析:題目要求先用大約30個(gè)詞概括短文的主要內(nèi)容,再用大約120個(gè)詞就“學(xué)生應(yīng)增強(qiáng)節(jié)約能源意識”話題發(fā)表自己的看法,寫作要點(diǎn)包括:增強(qiáng)節(jié)約意識的必要性;如何節(jié)約能源兩個(gè)方面;可以寫親身經(jīng)歷,也可以虛構(gòu)故事,不能直接引用短文中的句子;不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯(cuò)誤,盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀;注意行文的連貫性。
亮點(diǎn)說明:范文覆蓋了所有要點(diǎn),使用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯,具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力;使用了一些詞匯和短語來連接上下文,使作文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
語法方面:定語從句①which causes a large amount of energy to be wasted,②which will have a harmful effect on our environment;現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)...has influenced ecological balance;固定句型It is necessary for us students to enhance the awareness of saving energy;條件句①If schools are too far away from our homes,②as long as we make effort;時(shí)間狀語從句when we sleep or leave the rooms等,語法知識運(yùn)用嫻熟,有較扎實(shí)的語法基礎(chǔ);
固定短語和搭配:pay no attention to, a large amount of, have a harmful effect on, the awareness of, far away from, instead of, turn off等,使作文內(nèi)容得到充實(shí);
連接詞方面:范文使用Personally, First, Second, Besides, Fourth, In addition, In a word等來銜接句子和段落,使作文銜接緊密、語意連貫。
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