Question

19．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn) （﹨）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
One day I happened to find a chatting room on my QQ，there people were chatting in English．I try to chat with some of them．To my surprised，I found their oral English was better than me．I asked them for advice and they told me practice more on QQ．But every day after that I would spent one hour pratising my oral English on QQ．Day by day，I learned from many useful words and expressions．With time went by，I found I could even communicate some college students．

Answer 1

分析 一天我在QQ上發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)聊天室，里面的人用英文交流．我試圖和他們交流，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)他們的口語(yǔ)比我好．我向他們尋求建議，他們建議我多練習(xí)．因此我每天練習(xí)，漸漸地，我學(xué)會(huì)了很多單詞和短語(yǔ)，隨著時(shí)間的流逝，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己能和大學(xué)生交流了．

解答 One day I happened to find a chatting room on my QQ，there people were chatting in English．I try to chat with some of them．To my surprised，I found their oral English was better than me．I asked them for advice and they told me∧practice more on QQ．But every day after that I would spent one hour pratising my oral English on QQ．Day by day，I learned from many useful words and expressions．With time went by，I found I could even communicate∧some college students．
解析：
1．on-in．考查介詞． in my QQ 表示"在我的QQ里"，on QQ表示"通過(guò)QQ"．
2．there-where．考查定語(yǔ)從句．people were chatting in English是 先行詞my QQ的定語(yǔ)從句，my QQ在句子里做狀語(yǔ)，所以用關(guān)系副詞where．
3．try-tried．考查時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)上文可知謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞try用過(guò)去式tried．
4．surprised-surprise．考查固定短語(yǔ)．to my surprise表示"讓我吃驚的是"． 
5．me-mine．考查代詞．和their oral English 相對(duì)比用my oral English=mine．表示"我的"
6．practice前加to．考查固定短語(yǔ)．tell sb to do sth表示"告訴某人做某事"．
7．But-So．考查連詞．根據(jù)I would spent one hour pratising my oral English on QQ可知他聽(tīng)從了其他人的建議，所以它和上句是因果關(guān)系，所以用So．  
8 刪掉from．考查介詞．learn表示"學(xué)會(huì)"，learn from表示"向某人學(xué)習(xí)"，本句表示"我學(xué)會(huì)了很多單詞和短語(yǔ)"，所以 刪掉from．
9．with-As或went-going．考查固定句式．with time going by=as time went by表示"隨著時(shí)間的流逝"，因?yàn)閣ith是介詞，需要用復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)； as是連詞，用句子．所以with改為As或went改為going． 
10．communicate 后加with．考查介詞．communicate with sb 表示"和某人交流"．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查短文改錯(cuò)．
where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句：
1．先行詞表示具體地點(diǎn)的，并在在定語(yǔ)從句中做狀語(yǔ)的（不做主語(yǔ)，表語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ)），用where引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句．例如：this is the house where i once lived．
2．先行詞是表示抽象地點(diǎn)的如point，case，postion，condtion，activity，situation，job等，并作狀語(yǔ)用where引導(dǎo)．
You reach a point where medicine can't help．你已到了藥物無(wú)法治療的地步．
It's put me in a position where I can't afford to take the job．這使我陷入一種不能接受此工作的境地．