Question

我們國(guó)家長(zhǎng)期實(shí)行獨(dú)生子女政策，現(xiàn)在政府將放開這一政策，允許夫妻中一方是獨(dú)生子女的家庭生育第二個(gè)孩子，對(duì)此你怎么看。請(qǐng)圍繞以下幾點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

1. 談?wù)勀銓?duì)目前實(shí)施的獨(dú)生子女政策的理解；

2. 對(duì)未來實(shí)施夫妻中一方是獨(dú)生子女可生育第二個(gè)孩子的政策的想法；

3. 你對(duì)未來中國(guó)的人口問題有何期望，簡(jiǎn)述原因。

注意：1. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總指數(shù)。

2. 詞數(shù)：120-150左右。

“One Child” policy has been implemented for decades, which has benefited China since the struggle of an imbalanced development of population and economy in the late 1970s.

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Answer 1

“One Child” policy has been implemented for decades, which has benefited China since the struggle of an imbalanced development of population and economy in the late 1970s. Not only has it released the child-raising stress for each family, but it has lessened the burden on the whole society. However, every coin has two sides.

Though “One Child” policy has been proved an effective way to control the size of our population, it has generated various consequences, such as aging problem, “empty nest”syndrome, deficiency of young labor, to mention just a few. In consideration of the current phenomenon, a new policy that couples with one spouse being an only child will be pe-rmitted to have two children is right on its way.

There is no doubt that it will bring about some advantages, including alleviating the pressure of pension as well as lowering the risk of child loss. In the long run, it will definitely transform our social structure. Yet due to the profound impact of “One Child” policy, it still requires great effort to change people’s concept of childbirth, which will consequently give rise to the achievement of harmony between population and society.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求學(xué)生談?wù)剬?duì)政府放開獨(dú)生子女政策的看法。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：談?wù)剬?duì)獨(dú)生子女政策的理解；對(duì)生育第二個(gè)孩子的想法；對(duì)中國(guó)未來人口問題的期望等三個(gè)方面。詞數(shù)在120-150詞左右，開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯(cuò)誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說明：范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣�，并注意語句的連貫性；范文還使用了倒裝、同位語從句、定語從句等語法知識(shí)，具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。

語法方面：倒裝Not only has it released the child-raising stress...but...；同位語從句that couples with one spouse

being an only child will be permitted to have two children ；固定句型There is no doubt that it will bring

about some advantages；定語從句which will consequently give rise to the achievement of harmony between population and society等，語法知識(shí)運(yùn)用嫻熟，顯示了較強(qiáng)的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面：范文注意使用however, not only...but(also)..., as well as, yet, between...and等來銜接句子和段落，使表達(dá)變得更有條理；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了such as, to mention just a few, in consideration of, on its way, as well as, in the long run, due to, bring about, give rise to等短語和搭配，使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。

考點(diǎn)：材料類作文