【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I have a older sister. Her name is Monica. He is very pretty and smart, with long black hair and big eye. She is always ready to help me and look after me. But she was used to be easy to get angry, especially that she was with family members only. Once I talked to her this problem. Feeling terrible sorry, she agreed with me but promised to make a change. She also thanked me for making her aware of her problem. She had made huge progress on this issue so far. Now I like her even more and I am glad I have so a great sister.

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【解析】文章主要講述了作者的姐姐過去很愛發(fā)脾氣，特別是跟家人在一起的時(shí)候。在作者的建議下，他的姐姐發(fā)生了改變。

考查不定冠詞。句意：我有一個姐姐。older根據(jù)發(fā)音規(guī)律，應(yīng)使用不定冠詞an。故將a改為an。

考查代詞。句意：她很漂亮也很聰明。根據(jù)題意，故將He改為是She。

考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句意：她很漂亮，聰明，有長長的黑頭發(fā)和大眼睛。根據(jù)題意，eye眼睛應(yīng)使用復(fù)數(shù)，故將eye改為eyes。

考查固定短語。句意：但她很容易生氣。Be used to do被用于做某事。Used to do過去常常。根據(jù)題意，故將系動詞was去掉。

考查狀語從句。句意：但她很容易生氣，特別是跟家人在一起的時(shí)候。When引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句。根據(jù)題意，故將that改為when。

考查固定用法。句意：有一次我和她談過這個問題。talk to sb.about sth.與某人談?wù)撃呈隆８鶕?jù)題意，故填加about。

考查副詞。句意：感覺非常抱歉，她同意我的觀點(diǎn)和承諾做出改變。用副詞修飾動詞feel，故將形容詞terrible改為terribly。

考查連詞。句意：感覺非常抱歉，她同意我的觀點(diǎn)和承諾做出改變。前后為并列關(guān)系，不為轉(zhuǎn)折。故將連詞but改為and。

考查動詞時(shí)態(tài)。句意：到目前為止，在這個問題上她已經(jīng)取得了很大的進(jìn)步�！�so far”到目前為止，應(yīng)使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，故將had改為has。

考查副詞。句意：我很高興我有這樣一個好姐姐。so修飾形容詞或副詞，so+adj./adv.+a/an+n.；such修飾名詞，such+a/an+adj.+n.。根據(jù)題意 。故將so改為such。

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