Question

6．假定你是李華，本學期你校開設了英語寫作課，由來自美國的外教Shelly來授課．由于你在英語寫作方面感到很困難，故打算寫一封電子郵件向她求助，要點包括：
（1）告訴她你的困難；
（2）尋求幫助：如何提高寫作技能，如何擴大詞匯量，希望推薦寫作書目．
注意：（1）詞數100左右（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數）；
（2）可以適當增加內容，使內容充實、行文連貫．
Dear Shelly，
I'm Li Hua，one of your students in the writing class．I'm writing to seek help from you．
I find English writing really difficult because my vocabulary is too small．（高分句型一）Before high school，I was studying in the countryside，where teachers didn't have many English books to read．（高分句型二）I was wondering whether you could help me improve my writing skills and enlarge my vocabulary．Would you please also recommend some books on writing to/for me so that I can read them by myself to improve my writing？（高分句型三）
I would be grateful if you could give me a hand．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息本學期你校開設了英語寫作課，由來自美國的外教Shelly來授課．由于你在英語寫作方面感到很困難，故打算寫一封電子郵件向她求助，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：（1）告訴她你的困難；（2）尋求幫助：如何提高寫作技能，如何擴大詞匯量，希望推薦寫作書目．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：seek help尋求幫助；so that以便，為了；be grateful 感激的；give me a hand幫我一把
I find English writing really difficult because my vocabulary is too small．（高分句型一）
Before high school，I was studying in the countryside，where teachers didn't have many English books to read．（高分句型二）
Would you please also recommend some books on writing to/for me so that I can read them by myself to improve my writing？（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Shelly：
      I'm Li Hua，one of your students in your writing class． I'm writing to seek help from you．
      I find English writing really difficult because my vocabulary is too small．（高分句型一）Before high school，I was studying in the countryside，where teachers didn't have many English books to read．（高分句型二）I was wondering whether you could help me improve my writing skills and enlarge my vocabulary．Would you please also recommend some books on writing to/for me so that I can read them by myself to improve my writing？（高分句型三）
       I would be grateful if you could give me a hand．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．