Question

6．假定你是高二學(xué)生李華，在學(xué)校看到如下通知，請根據(jù)通知的內(nèi)容和寫作要點向?qū)W校寫一封申請信：

HOST FAMILIES WANTED Teachers and students from Central High School Phoenix will visit our school two weeks later．Host families are wanted to accommodate our friends． REQUIREMENTS： ◇Can communicate in English． ◇A SEPARATE room is a MUST． ◇A private car is preferred． If interested，please send your APPLICATION IN ENGLISH to the Office of the Principal before THURSDAY．Please consult us for any further information．

寫作要點：
1．你對參與該活動的認(rèn)識；2．你的優(yōu)勢；3．作為接待家庭的打算．
注意：
1．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100字左右．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．I'm writing to apply for becoming one of the host families to accommodate our friends． 
                                                                             
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文為讀寫任務(wù)類作文，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱為第一人稱為主，寫作要點：1．你對參與該活動的認(rèn)識；2．你的優(yōu)勢；3．作為接待家庭的打算．
（高分句型一）In addition，we can exchange our cultures and customs with each other，which will surely benefit both of us．
該句使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在句子指這件事情．
高分句型二）Not only am I skilled in English and good at communicating with foreigners freely and smoothly but also a separate room and a private car are available
句子使用了not only…but also的導(dǎo)致句式，強調(diào)了我的優(yōu)勢，即擅長用英語溝通；
高級詞匯：accommodation 食宿；exchange交換；meet all the requirements滿足所有的要求；
過渡短語：In addition另外；In brief總之；

解答 Dear sir or Madam，
       I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．I'm writing to apply for becoming one of the host families to accommodate our friends．After seeing your notice in relation to the accommodation activity，I am eager to be one of the host families．（我對活動的認(rèn)識） In my view，it will offer me a chance to improve my language skills．（高分句型一）In addition，we can exchange our cultures and customs with each other，which will surely benefit both of us．What matters most is that my family can meet all the requirements．（高分句型二）     Not only am I skilled in English and good at communicating with foreigners freely and smoothly but also a separate room and a private car are available．（我的優(yōu)勢） When the foreign friends settle down，I surely will show them around the interesting places in our lovely city and treat them to delicious Chinese foods of all kinds．（我的打算） In brief，I am prepared to accommodate our friends．
       I would be grateful if you would take my application into account．
                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                         Li  Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．