Question

【題目】閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

As many as one in seven recent graduates in Britain may have cheated by using essay mils (論文工坊) during the last four years, according to a recent study. Essay mills, also known as “constrict cheating”, refers to companies offering essay-writing services for a fee which is hard to-spot since the essays are written by humans or even tailored. Some British universities have seen' decline in transitional plagiarism (剿竊) but this is now being replaced by constrict cheating, figures show.

Experts have warned that essay mills have become more common, not only in Britain, but also across the world in recent years, with labor being outsourced to unemployed university graduates in counties like Kenya, India and Pakistan. Dr. Irene, academician manager at Coventry University and vice president European Network for Academic Integrity, said these figures are just the tip of the iceberg since so many instances go unnoticed. She added that students are being “bombarded (轟炸)” with advertisements for essay mills on social media as well as on campus.

The number of students using essay mills at different British universities

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1.以大約30詞概括所給文字和圖表的內(nèi)容；

2.簡述“論文工坊”可能造成的影響(至少兩點)；

3.就如何應對“論文工坊”，提出你的建議(至少兩點)。

[寫作要求]

1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；

3.不必寫標題。

[評分標準]

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。

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Answer 1

【答案】Essay mills have been uncovered as a new global way of academic cheating in universities,especially in Britain, where the number of students involved have multiplied in the last four years, greatly concerning educational experts.

The rise of essay mills does great harm to the development of students as well as the universities concerned. Students who take such a shortcut don't really acquire the knowledge and skills standardized for their graduation and future work. Therefore, the reputation of the universities will be spoiled in the long term, less able to carry out their functions of education and research.

In my opinion, essay mills must be cracked down on. First and Foremost, universities must introduce; new strategies accordingly to strengthen supervision and regulation. Meanwhile, the government is supposed to provide legal support and technological assistance. Last but not least, students should remember“no pains, no gains", trying to resist the temptation and develop their awareness of honesty and striving.

【解析】

這是一篇讀寫任務。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，1.以大約30詞概括所給文字和圖表的內(nèi)容；

2.簡述“論文工坊”可能造成的影響(至少兩點)；

3.就如何應對“論文工坊”，提出你的建議(至少兩點)

第二，人稱為第三人稱。第三，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時主。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段以大約30詞概括所給文字和圖表的內(nèi)容。第二段，簡述“論文工坊”可能造成的影響(至少兩點)。第三段，就如何應對“論文工坊”，提出你的建議(至少兩點)。

第三步：確定關鍵詞匯和短語：academic cheating, do great harm to, take such a shortcut, acquire the knowledge and skills standardized for their graduation and future work, carry out, strengthen supervision and regulation, resist the temptation.

第四步：確定較為高級的句子：who 引導的定語從句Students who take such a shortcut don't really acquire the knowledge and skills standardized for their graduation and future work.現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語Last but not least, students should remember “no pains, no gains", trying to resist the temptation and develop their awareness of honesty and striving.

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞進行過渡銜接：Therefore, First and Foremost, Meanwhile, Last but not least.

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。