【題目】你校最近舉辦了一次募捐活動，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇報道。

【寫作內(nèi)容】

基本情況：

1)組織者：校團委和義工協(xié)會 (The School League Committee & Volunteer Association)

2)時間：2014年11月28日下午3點至5點；

3)地點：學(xué)校一樓中央大廳( the Central Hall)；

4)捐助者：學(xué)校全體學(xué)生；

5)募捐物品：衣物、書本、文具等。

募捐目的：

1)通過此次活動培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的愛心；

2)幫助四川大涼山區(qū)家庭貧困的學(xué)生繼續(xù)學(xué)業(yè)。

募捐情況：

1）學(xué)生踴躍參加，捐出衣物、書籍、作業(yè)本、文具等一萬多件(item)，高三(22)班捐助最多。有一位不愿透露姓名的高三學(xué)生花了4000元零花錢購買藥品和文具捐到現(xiàn)場。

2）募捐所得已由義工協(xié)會成員送往捐助總站(the Donation Station)。

[寫作要求]

只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。

[評分標準]

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

【答案】

The School League Committee & Volunteer Association organized a donation activity in the Central Hall of the first floor of our school from 3 pm to 5 pm on November 28th, 2014. The purpose of the activity was to cultivate the students’ sense of love and help the poverty-stricken students from mountainous areas of Daliang Sichuan Province to continue their study. All of the students in our school took an active part in the activity, donating more than 10000 items of clothes, books, stationery and so on with Class 22, Senior 3 donating the most. An unnamed Senior 3 student spent 4000 yuan of his pocket money on medicine and stationery and donated them to the scene of the donation. All of these items have been delivered to the Donation Station by the members of the Volunteer Association.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于提綱作文，根據(jù)提示信息寫一次募捐的具體情況。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般過去時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如donating more than 10000 items of clothes,是非謂語短語作伴隨狀語。此外，文章還使用了大量短語如cultivate the students’ sense of love、donated … to等。這些短語以及句式為文章增加了色彩。

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