Question

【題目】為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動，學校舉辦以“How to behave well”為主題的英語征文比賽�，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)以下提示內容，用英語寫一篇參賽短文。

1. 衣著整潔；

2. 保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；

3. 待人有禮，樂于助人；

4. 遵守交通規(guī)則。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

How to behave well

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Answer 1

【答案】How to behave well

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

First, it's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Second, it's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on, and we should never say dirty words. Third, be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old. Last, we should also obey traffic rules. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于征文比賽。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動，學校舉辦以“How to behave well”為主題的英語征文比賽。現(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)以下提示內容，用英語寫一篇參賽短文。1.衣著整潔；2.保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；3.待人有禮，樂于助人；4.遵守交通規(guī)則。時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：In order to build a civilized city(為了建一個文明城市)；try our best to behave well in the activities(在活動中盡量表現(xiàn)好)；keep our clothes clean and tidy(保持衣服干凈和整潔)；obey traffic rules(遵守交通規(guī)則)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。