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第一節(jié)   短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)

請(qǐng)對(duì)每一行作出判斷，如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上劃一個(gè)√，如有錯(cuò)誤，按照改錯(cuò)的方法改，請(qǐng)將答案寫在答題卡上。

Once an old man saw a bag on his way to home.                            76. _______

In the bag there was a wolf. It was catching and put in                 77. _______

the bag by a shepherd（牧羊人） a few minutes ago.

The wolf asked the old man to let him out.                                 78. _______

The old man took pity on him and opened bag.                             79. _______

When the wolf got out， said to the old man， "I am very hungry.  80. _______

I want to eat you." The other old man could do nothing                  81. _______

and cry for help. Just then the shepherd came and saw this.            82. _______

He beat the wolf to death by a stick. Then he said to the                83. _______

old man， "wolves want to eat men all the time. It's nature            84. _______

will never change. We should took this as a good lesson."              85. ______　　

 

【答案】

76 刪去to.home是副詞，前面不能接介詞�！　�

77. catching改為caught.主語it與catch的關(guān)系為被動(dòng)關(guān)系,故用was caught.　　

78. 此行無錯(cuò)�！　�

79. bag前加the.bag在此重復(fù)提到，為特指。　　

80. said前加he.代詞漏用錯(cuò)誤。此句缺少主語,并且要與上文him保持一致�！　�

81. 刪去other.接上下文沒有"另一個(gè)老人".　　

82. and（cry）改為but（cry）。can do nothing but意為"只得做"，為習(xí)慣搭配。　　

83. by改為with.介詞錯(cuò)誤。"用……工具"常用"with……".　　

84. It's改為Its.同音詞混淆錯(cuò)誤。此處應(yīng)為"它的本性".　　

85. took改為take.情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后應(yīng)接動(dòng)詞原形。　　

【解析】略

 

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