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19．假設(shè)你是高二學(xué)生李華，得知某英文報(bào)招聘一名兼職記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封自薦信申請(qǐng)得到這個(gè)職位．主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．寫(xiě)信目的；
2．申請(qǐng)理由（語(yǔ)言?xún)?yōu)勢(shì)，性格優(yōu)點(diǎn)，相關(guān)經(jīng)歷…）；
3．希望獲準(zhǔn)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫并注意語(yǔ)言的得體性．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am a middle school student in Grade Two．I'm glad to learn that you want a part-time English reporter．I am writing to introduce myself．
I am confident that I am the right person you are looking for．（高分句型一）First，I have a good command of the English language．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I do well in both speaking and writing．（高分句型二）Besides，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．（高分句型三）Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．
I am sure I have the qualifications for the position．I would be grateful if you could offer me the chance．
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是高二學(xué)生李華，得知某英文報(bào)招聘一名兼職記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封自薦信申請(qǐng)得到這個(gè)職位，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：寫(xiě)信目的；申請(qǐng)理由（語(yǔ)言?xún)?yōu)勢(shì)，性格優(yōu)點(diǎn)，相關(guān)經(jīng)歷…）；希望獲準(zhǔn)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：look for尋找；have a good command of精通；Besides另外；get along with 與…相處；do well in在…方面做得好；Above all最重要的是；Look forward to盼望；
I am confident that I am the right person you are looking for．（高分句型一）
I've been learning English for 10 years，and I do well in both speaking and writing．（高分句型二）
Besides，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I am a middle school student in Grade Two．I'm glad to learn that you want a part-time English reporter．I am writing to introduce myself．
       I am confident that I am the right person you are looking for．（高分句型一）First，I have a good command of the English language．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I do well in both speaking and writing．（高分句型二）Besides，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．（高分句型三）Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．
       I am sure I have the qualifications for the position．I would be grateful if you could offer me the chance．
       Looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．