【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

For a person, belief always plays an important role in his life. Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorfully life. Otherwise, he will lose him in his own way of life. Belief is so important what it can change one’s fate. Marie Curie, famous scientist, also has set a good example. In 1898, Marie find a new element. In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hardly. At last they saw at the dim blue light of new element—radium, which made her dream came true.

To my personal view, it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely to getting successful and master his own life.

【答案】

【1】colorfully→colorful

【2】him→himself

【3】what→that

【4】famous前面加a

【5】find→found

【6】hardly→hard

【7】刪掉saw后的at

【8】came→come

【9】To→In

【10】getting→get

【解析】

【1】colorfully→colorful 考查詞性。此處修飾life，應(yīng)該用形容詞修飾。故colorfully改為colorful。

【2】him→himself 考查代詞。句意：他會(huì)用自己的生活方式失去自我。故him改為himself。

【3】what→that 考查連詞。根據(jù)前文的so，后文應(yīng)該用that連接，so...that...如此……以至于……，故what改為that。

【4】famous前面加a 考查冠詞。此處指的是一個(gè)著名的科學(xué)家，故famous前面加a。

【5】find→found 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)文章的時(shí)態(tài)可知，此處應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)。故find改為found。

【6】hardly→hard 考查固定用法。work hard指的是工作努力。故hardly改為hard。

【7】刪掉saw后的at 考查介詞。see是及物動(dòng)詞，后面可以直接加內(nèi)容。故刪掉saw后的at。

【8】came→come 考查固定用法。make是使役動(dòng)詞，后面動(dòng)詞要用原形，故came改為come。

【9】To→In 考查固定用法。此處指的是in my personal view（在我個(gè)人看來(lái)）。故To改為In。

【10】getting→get 考查動(dòng)詞。be likely to do有可能做某事，故getting改為get。

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