【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處 語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I was born as a poor boy and grew up in the streets without the care, guidance and supervision of your beloved parents. I have been experienced an empty stomach, be almost frozen. And I have also existed without secure shelter and proper education. As a young man, with some sadly experiences of life, I start to dream for my future. I want to become a great man who have power and authority, like Abraham Lincoln, Benjamin Franklin, Martin Luther King, Ralph Waldo Emerson, Winston Churchill and so on. Yes, I dream to become such great man because I want to change and improved my beloved country, when people in need can live a happy and peaceful life.

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【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了作者出身貧窮，但夢想有所改變，對國家有用。

1. 考查固定搭配。本句意為“我出生時(shí)是個(gè)窮孩子，在街上長大，沒有我親愛的父母的關(guān)心、指導(dǎo)和監(jiān)督。”固定搭配in the street，意為“在街上”。故將streets改為street。

2. 考查代詞。本句意為“我出生時(shí)是個(gè)窮孩子，在街上長大，沒有我親愛的父母的關(guān)心、指導(dǎo)和監(jiān)督。”此處指“我的父母的關(guān)心、指導(dǎo)和監(jiān)督�！保瑧�(yīng)用形容詞性物主代詞my。故將your改為my。

3. 考查語態(tài)。主語I和動(dòng)詞experience是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，用主動(dòng)語態(tài)，去掉been。故去掉been。

4. 考查現(xiàn)在分詞。本句意為“我經(jīng)歷過一次空腹，幾乎要被凍僵�！保司湟延兄^語have experienced，且無連詞，其它動(dòng)詞用非謂語形式，主語I和動(dòng)詞freeze是邏輯上的被動(dòng)關(guān)系，且此動(dòng)作表正在進(jìn)行，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞的被動(dòng)式（being done）。故將be改為being。

5. 考查連詞。本句意為“我也沒有安全的住所或適當(dāng)?shù)慕逃��！�，此處表選擇，應(yīng)用連詞or。故將and改為or。

6. 考查形容詞。名詞experiences，要用形容詞修飾，應(yīng)用形容詞sad。故將sadly改為sad。

7. 考查主謂一致。 who have power and authority是定語從句，先行詞是a great man（單數(shù)），在從句中作主語，主謂一致，謂語也用單數(shù)。故將have改為has。

8. 考查冠詞。固定用法such + a/an + adj. +單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞，意為“這樣/如此……”，great以輔音音素開頭，用不定冠詞a。故在great前面加a。

9. 考查動(dòng)詞。本句意為“因?yàn)槲蚁敫淖兒透纳莆倚膼鄣膰摇保?/span>want to do sth.（想要干某事），improve這個(gè)動(dòng)作在此處是主動(dòng)的，不是被動(dòng)的，應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞原形improve與change在語法結(jié)構(gòu)上一致。故將improved改為improve。

10. 考查定語從句關(guān)系詞。此處是非限制性定語從句，先行詞是my beloved country，指地點(diǎn)，關(guān)系詞在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語，應(yīng)用關(guān)系副詞。故將when改成where。

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