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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
When I began to learn English before about ten years ago, I wasn't very interesting in it. As a result, I didn't learn it well. My mother thought it was important of me to learn English well, but she became worried. Lucky for me, one of our neighbor named Jenny was good at English. My mother let her teach me English in my free time. Jenny was a wonderful teacher. She helped us realize that English was beautiful language. I fell in love with the language soon and decided to learning it well. In the following three years, I practice English with her and could finally speak it fluently.

Answer 1

【答案】①去掉before ②interesting改為interested ③of改為for ④but改為so ⑤Lucky改為Luckily ⑥neighbor改為neighbors ⑦us改為me ⑧was后面加a ⑨learning改為learn ⑩practice改為practiced
【解析】本文是一篇記敘文，作者講述自己的的母親幫助其學英語的經歷。①詞義重復。句意：當大約十年前開始學習英語，“about ten years ago”表示大約十年前，before多余。故把before去掉。②形容詞誤用。此處表示“感興趣的”，修飾主語I，應該用interested.故把interesting改為interested。③介詞誤用。It is+形容詞+for/of sb. to do sth.是固定句型，形容詞修飾的是做某事，句型中用for sb.，譯為“做某事對于某人是…”；形容詞修飾的是sb.，句型中用of sb.，譯為“某人做某事是…”。故把of改為for。（4）并列詞誤用。根據分析句子可知，前后半句是因果關系，故把but改為so。⑤副詞誤用。此處副詞作狀語，故把Lucky改為Luckily。⑥名詞的數誤用。句中表示“我的鄰居們其中之一”，one of后面跟名詞復數，neighbor應該用復數。故把neighbor改為neighbors。⑦代詞誤用。根據上文一直介紹母親對我的幫助，因此本句中us應該改為me。⑧冠詞誤用。英語是一門語言，language是單數可數名詞，前面應該用不定冠詞，根據beautiful 讀音是以輔音開頭，用a.故加上a。⑨不定式誤用。decide后面跟to do sth.，故把learning改為learn.⑩時態(tài)誤用。本篇一直介紹過去的事情，用一般過去時，并根據“In the following three years”也是表達過去的時間，故把practice改為practiced.