【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文 中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或 修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞；

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉；

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

As it is known to all, the Great Wall is one of the most famous tourist attraction in China. Everybody wants to get there, but I am no exception. Then, during this summer vacation, the day I had been looking forward to coming last. Exciting, I got up very early that day and set off with my brother Tim followed behind. After a two-hour bus ride, we arrived at what looked like large market, that there were millions of people talking, pushing and photographing. Owing for that, my enthusiasm immediately disappeared. Indeed, for me, the Great Wall is real something that must be experienced with ease and privacy.

【答案】1.去掉it

2.attraction→attractions

3.but→and

4.coming→come

5.Exciting→Excited

6.followed→following

7.like后添加a

8.that→where

9.for→to

10.real→really

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章主要記敘了作者暑假去游覽中國長城的經(jīng)歷。

1.考查定語從句。句意：眾所周知，長城是中國最著名的名勝。此處為as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，as引導(dǎo)定語從句，并在句中作主語，故此處無需it。故去掉it。

2.考查名詞的數(shù)。attraction為可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)上文one of后跟復(fù)數(shù)形式表示“……其中之一”可知，應(yīng)用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。故attraction改為attractions。

3.考查連詞。句意：為每個(gè)人都想去那里，我也不例外。此處為并列關(guān)系，無轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故but改為and。

4.考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。come作此句的謂語動(dòng)詞，這一天已經(jīng)到了，故應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。故coming改為came。

5.考查形容詞。此處修飾主語I的狀語，應(yīng)用-ed結(jié)尾形容詞excited，表示“興奮的”。故Exciting改為Excited。

6.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。此處為with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，且Tim與follow構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞。故followed改為following。

7.考查冠詞。market為可數(shù)名詞，此處表示泛指應(yīng)用不定冠詞，且large為輔音音素開頭的單詞故用a。故like后添加a。

8.考查定語從句。此處為非限定性定語從句修飾上文market，且先行詞在從句中做地點(diǎn)狀語，故用關(guān)系副詞where。故that改為where。

9.考查介詞。根據(jù)短語owing to表示“因?yàn)�，由于”。�?/span>for改為to。

10.考查副詞。此處修飾后文整個(gè)句子應(yīng)用副詞really。故real改為really。

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