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【題目】假設(shè)你是一中學(xué)生李華。近日，你的英語(yǔ)筆友John聽說(shuō)你們學(xué)校正在開展“建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(huì)(Construction of an energy-saving society)”主題活動(dòng)，發(fā)來(lái)郵件請(qǐng)你介紹一下你對(duì)活動(dòng)的看法和建議。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)給John回復(fù)郵件。

1.不浪費(fèi)糧食和紙張;

2.盡量不使用方便筷（disposable chopsticks)、塑料袋;

3.畢業(yè)生將書贈(zèng)給低年級(jí)同學(xué)循環(huán)使用;

4.其他建議（如綠色出行等）

5.只有我們共同努力……

注意:

1. 不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);

2. 詞數(shù)：120左右。開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

Dear John,

Glad to receive your E-mail.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John，

①Glad to receive your e-mail.

②As you know, there has been an activity of “Construction of an energy-saving society” in our school recently. ③I think it is of vital importance because our society is faced with the increasing danger of lack of energy. ④Many reasonable suggestions are given during the activity.

⑤In my opinion, there’re many things we can do. ⑥In our daily life, we shouldn’t waste any food or paper. ⑦It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. ⑧Besides, I think the government should make it a rule that used textbooks should not be thrown away when we graduate from school, because most of the books are in good condition and can be recycled.

⑨Actually, there are quite a lot that we can easily do, for example, try to take buses or bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. ⑩Only with joint efforts can we help to construct an energy-saving society.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱作文，內(nèi)容是用英語(yǔ)給John回復(fù)郵件，介紹一下你對(duì)活動(dòng)的看法和建議。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)就是主要內(nèi)容。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫。本文寫作時(shí)可以按照提示的3個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言連貫。同時(shí)使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如賓語(yǔ)從句I think it is of vital importance because our society is faced with the increasing danger of lack of energy主語(yǔ)從句It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.倒裝句Only with joint efforts can we help to construct an energy-saving society.等