Question

8．假如你叫李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter給發(fā)來(lái)一份郵件咨詢?cè)鯓犹岣咧形乃�平．�?qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提供的要點(diǎn)，寫一封回件：
1、參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班；   2、多看中文書刊、收看中文電視；  3、聽中文歌  4、交中國(guó)朋友
要求：1、100字左右     2、為使行文連貫，你可以適當(dāng)增加一些內(nèi)容；
3、信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
                                                       
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students．
首先，學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)課程很重要，因?yàn)槟憧梢韵蚶蠋煂W(xué)習(xí)，也可以和你的同學(xué)一起練習(xí)．
高分句型二：
Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．
此外，要學(xué)唱中文歌是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的主意，因?yàn)檫@樣做，你會(huì)更容易的學(xué)習(xí)和記憶漢字．

解答 Dear Peter，
   I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
   Here are a few suggestions．First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students（高分句型一）．Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．
Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily（高分句型二）．You can make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．
Try and write me in Chinese next time．
Best wishes，
Yours truly，
Li Hua

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