Question

20．A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day．As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank，he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car．He tried again and again but couldn't get the car moving．Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried．Arthur stopped and asked，"It looks like you've got a problem，"Arthur said．
"I'm afraid so．I'm in a big hurry and I can't start my car．"
"Is there something I can do to help？"Arthur asked．The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said，
"Thanks．If you're sure it wouldn't be too much trouble，you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi．"
"No trouble at all．I'd be glad to help．"
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat．After placing it on the ground，he turned to get the other one．Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking，he heard the loud noise of an alarm．
It was from te bank．There had been a robbery!
Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before．Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions．Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank．People asked each other，"What happened？"But everyone had a different answer．
Arthur，still carrying the suitcase，turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him．
She looked at the suitcase and then at him．Arthur was surprised．"Why is she looking at me like that？"He thought．"The suitcase!She thinks I'm the bank thief!"
Arthur looked around at the crowd of people．He became frightened，and without another thought，he started to run．
注意：
1．所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線(xiàn)的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3．續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；
4．續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線(xiàn)標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)．
Paragraph 1：
As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，"Stop，stop!"Arthur immediatelyrealized that the young manwas the bank robber．So Arthur didn't stop，but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front of him．He quickly put the suitcasein the car and said to the driver，"Please hurry to the Police Station．I have a case to report to the police．The man shouting behind is the bank thief!''The taxi raced away to the Police Station like an arrow．
Paragraph 2：
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur．said to the police who had been waiting and who had already received therobberyreport，This suitcaseis that of the bank robber．It may be filled with the money stolen fromthe bank，I hand it to you．Please get ready to arrest the man．"．

Answer 1

分析 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
So Arthur didn't stop，but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front of him
因此亞瑟并沒(méi)有停止，而是繼續(xù)運(yùn)行，直到他看到了在他前面的一輛出租車(chē)．
高分句型二：
It may be filled with the money stolen from the bank，I hand it to you．Please get ready to arrest the man．
它充滿(mǎn)了從銀行偷來(lái)的錢(qián)，我把它交給你．請(qǐng)準(zhǔn)備逮捕的人．

解答 As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，"Stop，stop!" Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank robber．So Arthur didn't stop，but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front of him（高分句型一）．He quickly put the suitcase in the car and said to the driver，"Please hurry to the Police Station．I have a case to report to the police．The man shouting behind is the bank thief!''The taxi raced away to the Police Station like an arrow．
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur said to the police who had been waiting and who had already received the robbery report，This suitcase is that of the bank robber．It may be filled with the money stolen from the bank，I hand it to you．Please get ready to arrest the man（高分句型二）．"

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫(xiě)作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．