Question

【題目】請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。

我們的班長

1.個人信息：李敏……（兩點(diǎn)）

2.學(xué)習(xí)（英語）和工作

3.你的評價……

注意：1、詞數(shù)：100詞左右；2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Our Monitor

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Answer 1

【答案】Our Monitor

Li Min is our monitor. She is tall r healthy and lively. She does well in all subjects. She is fond of sports and is good at singing and dancing.

What impresses us is that she is very strict with herself in her work and daily life. She works hard at English. When she came to the school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the English language. But she always tried tried to overcome them. She was active in class and did a lot of practice after class. No pains, no gains. With great efforts she made much progress in English study. What’s more, she is always assisting our teachers to run our class.

She is modest and always ready to help others. She sets us all a good example.

【解析】本文考查記敘文的寫作。要求考生根據(jù)題目提供的信息，組織語言材料，編寫成文。寫作時要明確清楚地表達(dá)所給要點(diǎn)。本文是一篇描寫人物的作文，要注意介紹人物的身份和主要事跡，最后不要忘記給出評價。第一段，開門點(diǎn)題描寫人物的身份和外貌，切記言簡意賅，長短句相間。第二段可以從兩個方面描寫人物的主要事跡：學(xué)習(xí)和工作，描寫時要圍繞一個主題句展開，層次分明，本段盡量多使用一些高級句型和短語，增強(qiáng)文章的可讀性，提高文章的文采。第三段給出評價，結(jié)尾部分要干凈利落，不啰嗦。同時注意在寫作中過渡詞和連接詞的使用以及詞數(shù)的限制。

范圍亮點(diǎn)：范文要點(diǎn)齊全，流暢連貫，使用了較多高級句型和詞匯：What impresses us is that…使用了主語從句和表語從句；When she came to the school…使用了狀語從句；had quite a lot of difficulties with…是固定詞組；No pains, no gains.是諺語；…she made much progress in English study使用了定語從句；sets us all a good example是固定搭配。