Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上周組織了一次以“科技讓生活更美好”為主題的社會實(shí)踐活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述參觀科技公司的整個過程。

注意： 詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：3D打印機(jī) 3D printer

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Friday, our class organized an activity themed “Technology makes life better”.

In the morning, we set off for a technology company. An engineer there welcomed us and gave a lecture on 3D printing, introducing its history, development and application in fields like architecture, medicine, etc. Then he showed us how the 3D printer works. We were amazed at the magic of technology and couldn’t wait to give it a try. Our group first designed a 3D model of a bike and then operated the printer as instructed. Watching the bike gradually taking shape, we felt excited. When all our works were displayed on the table, we admired them and some took photos to record this unforgettable experience.

This is really an educative and eye-opening activity in which I was impressed with the convenience and benefits brought by technology.

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上周組織了一次以“科技讓生活更美好”為主題的社會實(shí)踐活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述參觀科技公司的整個過程。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：set off (出發(fā))；3D printer (3D打印機(jī))；architecture (建筑學(xué))；be amazed at (驚訝于)；give it a try (嘗試)；be impressed with(對……印象深刻)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般過去時。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。