Question

5．假設(shè)你是中學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友Tom想了解中國人的吃文化，請用英語給他回信．要點(diǎn)包括：中國菜食材廣泛；烹制方法多樣；不同地區(qū)，菜的味道區(qū)別較大；
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右，
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Tom
I'm glad to introduce chinese dishes for you．
Famous for its abundance and exquisite，Chinese food culture has occupied an important part in the nation's tradition cultures（高分句型一）．China is of long history with a vast territory．Due to the diversity of the climate，products and customs，there are widely different food styles and taste in local regions．Through creation by past dynasties，the long standing cooking art has formed rich and colorful local dishes．Among them，"the eight major dishes"enjoys the upper reputation，which consists of Shangdong，Chekiang，Sichuan，Jiangshu，Guangdong，Hunan，F(xiàn)ujian and Anhwei．
Shandong dishes are divided into two factions as Tsinan and Jiaodong dishes．They are good at clear dishes，pure but not greasy．Sichuan dishes have enjoyed the fame that every dish has its own characteristic and none two share the same taste．They are also famous for pocked，peppery and savor taste．Chengdu and Chongqing dishes are two mail branches．Jiangsu dishes lay stress on the original taste with proper sweetness and salty．They consist of Yangzhou，Suzhou and Nanking branches．Chekiang dishes are both delicious and sweet smelling，both soft and slide，clean and not greasy．They consist of Hangzhou，Ningbo and Shaoxing branches（高分句型二）．What's more，the steamed dishes and vegetable dishes have their own charms．Actually，Chinese dishes have earned world's fame．The Chinese eateries could be found everywhere throughout the world．Many foreigners regard having a Chinese meal as a high honor．
Your sincerely
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
Famous for its abundance and exquisite，Chinese food culture has occupied an important part in the nation's tradition cultures．
中國飲食文化以其豐富多彩而著稱于世，在中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化中占有重要地位．
高分句型二：
Chekiang dishes are both delicious and sweet smelling，both soft and slide，clean and not greasy．They consist of Hangzhou，Ningbo and Shaoxing branches．
浙江菜很好吃，香，軟，滑，干凈，不油膩．它們包括杭州、寧波和紹興的分支．

解答 Dear Tom
I'm glad to introduce chinese dishes for you．
Famous for its abundance and exquisite，Chinese food culture has occupied an important part in the nation's tradition cultures（高分句型一）．China is of long history with a vast territory．Due to the diversity of the climate，products and customs，there are widely different food styles and taste in local regions．Through creation by past dynasties，the long standing cooking art has formed rich and colorful local dishes．Among them，"the eight major dishes"enjoys the upper reputation，which consists of Shangdong，Chekiang，Sichuan，Jiangshu，Guangdong，Hunan，F(xiàn)ujian and Anhwei．
Shandong dishes are divided into two factions as Tsinan and Jiaodong dishes．They are good at clear dishes，pure but not greasy．Sichuan dishes have enjoyed the fame that every dish has its own characteristic and none two share the same taste．They are also famous for pocked，peppery and savor taste．Chengdu and Chongqing dishes are two mail branches．Jiangsu dishes lay stress on the original taste with proper sweetness and salty．They consist of Yangzhou，Suzhou and Nanking branches．Chekiang dishes are both delicious and sweet smelling，both soft and slide，clean and not greasy．They consist of Hangzhou，Ningbo and Shaoxing branches（高分句型二）．What's more，the steamed dishes and vegetable dishes have their own charms．Actually，Chinese dishes have earned world's fame．The Chinese eateries could be found everywhere throughout the world．Many foreigners regard having a Chinese meal as a high honor．
                                                                                                                                                                                  Your sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                        Li hua

點(diǎn)評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．