【題目】假設(shè)你叫李華，你的一位朋友John剛從國外歸來，邀請你參加本周日在他家舉辦的朋友聚會(huì)，但你不能參加。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封電子郵件：

1. 忙于準(zhǔn)備高考；

2. 身體不適；

3. 表示歉意并另約時(shí)間。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右。

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】Dear John，

Welcome back. It is very kind of you to invite me to your party to be held this Sunday. I’m afraid that I can’t make it. Therefore, I'm writing to extend my apology to you.

As you know, the College Entrance Exam is approaching and I am now really busy preparing for it. It is only with great effort that I will be admitted into my ideal college. What’s worse, having caught a bad cold lately，I am really not myself. Therefore , I have no choice but to stay at home for a few days until I recover.

I sincerely hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology. By the way , is it possible that we make another arrangement ? If so, please send me a reply about your preferable time. Wish you enjoy your time at the party.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文, 要求寫一封道歉信。

第一步：

審題：道歉信

人稱：第一人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分表示道歉，第二部分說明不能參加聚會(huì)的原因，

第三部分再次表達(dá)歉意，希望能另約時(shí)間。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 表示道歉：不能參加John本周日在他家舉辦的朋友聚會(huì)

2．說明不能參加晚會(huì)的原因

①忙于準(zhǔn)備高考：必須努力才能考上理想的大學(xué)

②身體不適：最近感冒了，要幾天才能恢復(fù)

3．再次表達(dá)歉意，希望能另約時(shí)間

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語）

invite sb. to …； hold；make it；extend apology to sb.；approach；be busy doing…；prepare for；be admitted into；catch a bad cold；be oneself. ；have no choice but to do…；recover；make another arrangement

第三步：連詞成句

(1)It is very kind of you to invite me to your party.

(2) The party will be held this Sunday.

(3)The College Entrance Exam is approaching.

(4)I am busy preparing for it.

(5) I will be admitted into my ideal college only with great effort.

(6) I have caught a bad cold lately.

(7) I am not myself.

(8) I have to stay at home for a few days until I recover.

(9)I hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.

(10)Is it possible that we make another arrangement ?

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點(diǎn)詞匯)

將第二個(gè)句子轉(zhuǎn)換成不定式作定語，連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(1)It is very kind of you to invite me to your party.

(2) The party will be held this Sunday.

→It is very kind of you to invite me to your party to be held this Sunday.

用多種句式表達(dá)“……即將來臨”

(3)The College Entrance Exam is approaching.

→The College Entrance Exam is coming.

→The College Entrance Exam is on the way.

→The College Entrance Exam is just around the corner.

用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型表達(dá)下面的句子

(5) I will be admitted into my ideal college only with great effort.

→It is only with great effort that I will be admitted into my ideal college.

用分詞作原因狀語連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(6) I have caught a bad cold lately.

(7) I am not myself.

→Having caught a bad cold lately, I am not myself.

用短語替換下句中的have to

(8) I have to stay at home for a few days until I recover.

→I have no choice but to stay at home for a few days until I recover.

→I have no alternative but to stay at home for a few days until I recover.

適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用高級詞匯、復(fù)雜句式提升文章的檔次，增加文章的可讀性。

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