Question

16．某英文報社準(zhǔn)備發(fā)一篇題為"Living in a City"有關(guān)城市生活利與弊的文章．根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇英文短文．
優(yōu)點：找工作容易；交通便利；有公園、飯店等休閑場所．
缺點：生活消費高；人口多，擁擠；空氣污染，居住環(huán)境差．
要求：1．覆蓋以上全部內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
      2．詞數(shù)100左右，標(biāo)題已給出．
                       Living in a City
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages． 居住在城市有優(yōu)點也有缺點．
高分句型二：
It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside．對人們來說很難找到一個像鄉(xiāng)下一樣能享受平靜和新鮮空氣的地方．
句型一 Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages 該句的主語為動名詞短語充當(dāng)，動名詞以及動名詞短語做主語，應(yīng)注意謂語使用單數(shù)
句型二   where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside 該句是一個由where 引導(dǎo)的定語從句，where在從句中充當(dāng)?shù)攸c狀語

解答 Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages．（高分句型一） It is often easier to find work．There are always many choices of public transport．Besides，there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see．You can eat in good restaurants，visit museums，go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax．（城市生活優(yōu)點）However，living in a city is often very expensive．You must find a well-paid job，otherwise，you will not be able to afford the things you will do．What's more，the city is always crowded，noisy and dirty．It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside．（城市生活缺點）（高分句型二）
   Anyway，you can make the choice that suits you best．

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．