分析 這是一篇提綱類作文,根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱來敘述,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主.內(nèi)容包括一點明寫信目的;二學校的情況;三感受和打算.
高分句型:
1.My teachers are all kind and I believe I'll make great progress with them teaching me.(with+n+doing構(gòu)成復合結(jié)構(gòu),做句子的原因狀語)
我的老師都很和藹,我相信在他們的教導下,我會取得很大的進步.
2.I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a bright future(so that引導目的狀語從句,表示"為了以便于").
我下決心要努力學習,以便于有一個光明的未來.
解答 Dear Jane,
How's everything going? I'm glad to have met you and become friends with you.I miss you very much and thus I'm writing to tell you something about my new life at senior high school(點明寫信目的).
My new school is as beautiful as a huge garden.There're green trees and grass and colorful flowers everywhere.My teachers are all kind and I believe I'll make great progress with them teaching me(高分句型一).My classmates are very friendly and I've made many new friends here(學校的情況).I feel that my new life is very exciting,but I also realize that it is full of challenges.I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a bright future(高分句型二).Of course,I'll also do more exercise to keep fit.(感受和打算)(120 words)
I'm looking forward to your reply.
點評 寫作時要注意使用高級的詞匯和復雜的句型,也要適當?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后,用詞要得體,符合語言環(huán)境.例如To begin with,In addition,Last but not least,使文章更加連貫.
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