Question

We all know that "Chances favor the prepared mind"． Only if you are well prepared, will you be able to seize them.

注意： 1．無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語。

2．除詩歌外，文體不限。

3．文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)習(xí)名稱。

4．詞數(shù)不少于120詞。

Answer 1

There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life．However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared．I didn’t realize it until I went to high school.

Soon after I became a senior one student, a singing competition was to be held in school．I love singing but I was very shy then and had never sung at the top of my voice in public．I could only sing to myself most of the time．Somehow, I wanted to have a try．When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as I got well prepared, I would make it．With their encouragement, I became confident and practiced hard after class．Sometimes, I would turn to my music teacher for help．When I felt I was ready, the day came．Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions．It turned out that I won the first prize ．

This experience has taught me a precious lesson in my life．If you are not successful yet, most probably you haven’t been well prepared．Once you have, chances will surely favor you.

【解析】

試題分析：本題提示是：我們都知道“機(jī)會偏愛有準(zhǔn)備的頭腦”只有你準(zhǔn)備好，你才能抓住機(jī)會。題目要求結(jié)合生活實例來寫一篇文章，此類題目更偏向于類似記敘文寫作，考生盡量寫成記敘文，以減小題目難度。范文為經(jīng)典的三段論式寫作，第一段為總起段，第二段記敘生活經(jīng)歷，第三段總述全文。第一段開頭There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life．使用了that領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的定語從句；第二句中many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared．首先使用了that領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的賓語從句，又使用了who領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的定語從句；第二段第一句中Soon after I became a senior one student, a singing competition was to be held in school．使用了after領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；第四句When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice使用了when領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；第二段倒數(shù)第二句Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions．使用了一個伴隨狀語從句；最后一段最后一句Once you have, chances will surely favor you使用了once領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的狀語從句。本文短語使用也十分精彩，使用了be eager for渴望…，have a try試一試，as long as只要，turn to向…尋求幫助，turn out結(jié)果是等許多常用的短語。本文在詞語上最大亮點就是副詞的使用，如使用了However然而，Soon不久，Somehow不知怎么的，Sometimes有時，這些副詞的使用，使得文章的句型轉(zhuǎn)換更加自然，不會使文章顯得過于累贅，用的恰到好處�？偨Y(jié)：記敘文寫作首先要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，其次注意從句不要使用過于頻繁，以免使文章過于累贅。

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