假如你是李華。你的兩位朋友Tom與Peter幾天前發(fā)生了爭(zhēng)吵。3月9日是Peter生日,Tom想送他一個(gè)禮物來(lái)緩和關(guān)系,修復(fù)友情,特地發(fā)來(lái)郵件尋求你的建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom回一封郵件:
1.禮物選擇:
2.你的理由;
3.其它和解建議。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右:
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫:
3.開頭和結(jié)尾己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.
                                                                                      
Best wishes,
Li Hua


a possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.
Best wishes,
Li Hua

解析試題分析:本文要求寫一封郵件,同學(xué)們對(duì)此形式非常熟悉,內(nèi)容也和學(xué)生的生活聯(lián)系密切,所以寫起來(lái)應(yīng)該是得心應(yīng)手,寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意的問(wèn)題是:一、仔細(xì)審題,寫郵件的目的是就道歉的事情尋求建議,所以內(nèi)容要圍繞三個(gè)要點(diǎn)展開。二、在寫郵件時(shí)要開門見山提出寫信的目的,就本文而言要首先表明自己對(duì)禮物的建議。三、在篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面,要注意層次性和邏輯性,尤其是在解釋理由方面,可以使用一些表示層次的連詞,如firstly、secondly、besides、what’s more等。四、在語(yǔ)言方面,要簡(jiǎn)潔明了,盡量使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)以提高文章檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面,層次清晰。開頭用虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句子委婉地提出了自己的建議。在解釋原因和提出其他建議時(shí),作者用到了as far as I know 、in the meanwhile 、besides、apart from等詞匯和短語(yǔ),使段落非常具有層次性,而且還用到了定語(yǔ)從句which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.狀語(yǔ)從句Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body,No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.等復(fù)合句,顯示了作者對(duì)句型結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確把握,成為了文章的亮點(diǎn)。
考點(diǎn):考查提綱作文。

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