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增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I had an amazing experience last Spring Festival.On the second day of the holiday,it was snowing heavily but we had a very importance relative to visit,that lived in a distant mountain village.We have to take risks to drive on our journey.Though the road was bad,but we arrived safe.

The family welcomed us warmly or we said “Happy new year” to them.We were treated a good dinner.Later in the afternoon,we said goodbye and started back home.

Sadly,our car was sticking in the snow halfway and wouldn't move.Just then,the village walked by,offering to push his car.It was this stranger who helped us out!

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【解析】本文為記敘文。文章記敘了自己春節(jié)期間的一次有意思的經(jīng)歷。

第一處：importance改為important；考查形容詞。此處為relative的定語，意為“一個非常重要的親戚”，應(yīng)使用形容詞。故importance改為important。

第二處：that改為who；考查非限定性定語從句。此處為非限定性定語從句，先行詞為relative，連詞在從句中作主語，that不能引導(dǎo)非限定性定語從句。故that改為who。

第三處：have改為had；考查動詞時態(tài)。此處描述的是過去的事情，應(yīng)使用一般過去時。故have改為had。

第四處：去掉but；考查讓步狀語從句。though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句時，不能再出現(xiàn)but/and/or等并列連詞。故去掉but。

第五處：safe改為safely；考查副詞。此處修飾動詞arrived，應(yīng)使用副詞形式。故safe改為safely。

第六處：or改為and；考查并列連詞。此處前后句意為并列關(guān)系，不存在選擇關(guān)系。故or改為and。

第七處：treated后加with/to；考查詞組搭配。be treated with/to sth.“用某物招待某人”為固定搭配。故treated后加with/to。

第八處：sticking改為stuck；考查動詞語態(tài)。句意：悲劇的是，我們的車被困在了雪里。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應(yīng)使用被動語態(tài)。故sticking改為stuck。

第九處：the改為a；考查冠詞。此處泛指“一個村民”，應(yīng)使用不定冠詞。故the改為a。

第十處：his改為our；考查代詞。根據(jù)語境可知，此處指“我們的車”。故his改為our。

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