Question

書面表達（30分）
據報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌（lung cancer）后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協會（ACS）決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。
假如你是新華中學的學生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內容包括：
l  自我介紹
l  得知的情況
l  表示鼓勵
l  打算為她做什么
l  祝她早日康復
注意：
1. 信的格式已為你寫好
2. 信中不得出現你的真實情況。
3. 詞數100左右。
4. 請在答題卡上作答。
Dear Amy,
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Amy,
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.
At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.
I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. It will give more courage to live on.
May you recover soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。要求用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信。要點都已經給出，信件要點包括：自我介紹，得知的情況，表示鼓勵，打算為她做什么，祝她早日康復，審題時注意時態(tài)的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。象范文的I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is.使用了no matter how引導的讓步狀語從句，還有I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you.用了非限制性定語從句。還要用適當的連接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
點評：書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。