Question

7．假設你是高中生李華，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫（to scribble） 和亂丟垃圾（to litter）的行為，請用英語給校長寫一封100-120個詞的信．信中應包括以下內容：
1．說明寫信目的；
2．對這些行為進行批評；
3．提出兩點建議．
注意：信的抬頭、落款及信得第一句已給出（不計詞數）．
Dear Mr．Headmaster，
I am Li Hua，a student from Class 1，SeniorⅠ．
I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students：litter and scribbling．（寫信的目的）
It makes our school dirty and unpleasant，and does harm to the image of our school．I always feel ashamed whenever I see this．【高分句型】It is clearly not appropriate for astudent to litter and scribble about．【高分句型】（對不良行為進行批評）
I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specified rules against such behaviour．【高分句型】At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves．I believe that，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future．Thank you for your consideration．（提出建議）

Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據所提供的材料，寫一封信給校長，請求關注校園中的不良行為，屬應用文．要點包括：說明寫信的目的；對這些行為進行批評；提出建議．寫作時以一般現在時為主．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：draw one's attention to sth （吸引某人的主意），do harm to （損壞，損害），feel ashamed（感到羞恥），set up （建立），develop good habits （養(yǎng)成良好的習慣），with the joint efforts of （共同的努力）．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：
It makes our school dirty and unpleasant，and does harm to the image of our school．I always feel ashamed whenever I see this．【高分句型】
It is clearly not appropriate for astudent to litter and scribble about．【高分句型】
I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specified rules against such behaviour．【高分句型】

解答 Dear Mr．Headmaster，
      I am Li Hua，a student from Class 1，SeniorⅠ．I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students：litter and scribbling．（寫信的目的）
      It makes our school dirty and unpleasant，and does harm to the image of our school．I always feel ashamed whenever I see this．【高分句型】It is clearly not appropriate for astudent to litter and scribble about．【高分句型】（對不良行為進行批評）
       I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specified rules against such behaviour．【高分句型】At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves．I believe that，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future．Thank you for your consideration．（提出建議）
                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．