Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李華, 你所在的社區(qū)給每戶居民都發(fā)放了一張“鄰里互助卡”, 居民可以通過(guò)它隨時(shí)可以獲得身邊鄰居的幫助,互助卡架起了一座連心橋. 請(qǐng)將這一情況反映給某報(bào)社, 并發(fā)表自己的看法.

注意: 1.詞數(shù) 100左右, 開頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

2.不得在作文中提及任何考生個(gè)人信息

參考詞匯：互助卡 a help card 和諧的 harmonious 社區(qū) community

Dear editor,

I am Li Hua, a senior middle school student. __________________________________

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m Li Hua, a senior middle school student. I’m glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in my community because of a help card.

Recently, the relationship between the neighbors in my community is becoming more and more harmonious. If you forget to bring keys, your neighbors will invite you to their homes, where you can wait and have a cup of tea. If there is something wrong with your computer, you can call a neighbor who is good at repairing it, according to the information offered by the card. If you are ill, but you can’t find a doctor at night, you can get help from the card. This is very useful, especially for the old left alone at home.

I think if people can help each other, the world will be a better place to live in. Don’t you think so?

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是李華, 你所在的社區(qū)給每戶居民都發(fā)放了一張“鄰里互助卡”, 居民可以通過(guò)它隨時(shí)可以獲得身邊鄰居的幫助,互助卡架起了一座連心橋. 請(qǐng)將這一情況反映給某報(bào)社, 并發(fā)表自己的看法. 寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。

注意: 1.詞數(shù) 100左右, 開頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.不得在作文中提及任何考生個(gè)人信息

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文是一篇英語(yǔ)書信，采用三段式，格式正確，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，運(yùn)用高級(jí)句子。I’m glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in my community because of a help card.賓語(yǔ)從句運(yùn)用合理；the relationship between the neighbors in my community is becoming more and more harmonious.比較級(jí)起到強(qiáng)調(diào)的作用；If you forget to bring keys, your neighbors will invite you to their homes, where you can wait and have a cup of tea.條件狀語(yǔ)從句和where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；according to the information offered by the card.過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ)；I think if people can /span>help each other, the world will be a better place to live in賓語(yǔ)從句和條件狀語(yǔ)從句巧妙運(yùn)用；a better place to live in.動(dòng)詞不定式作后置定語(yǔ)；另外，because of，Recently, Don’t you think so?的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。