Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你收到朋友李磊的來信，他告訴你他不適應高一數(shù)學老師的課，在數(shù)學方面有些困難，以至于跟不上其他同學，感到非常著急。請給他回復一封電子郵件，想辦法解決這方面的困難。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：適應adapt to

Dear Li Lei，

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Lei，

Having received your letter in which you told me that you had trouble adapting to your math teacher, I feel very sorry for you. However, it’s easy to change if you take my advice into consideration.

Firstly, you’d better listen to the teacher carefully in class. You can turn to your math teacher and ask your teacher to explain what you can not understand after class. Secondly, confidence is very important. You should be confident and believe in yourself. Finally, you can communicate with your classmates and get some advice on maths.

Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and make some progress in math.

Best wishes!

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，幫朋友想辦法解決問題。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

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2. 具體內(nèi)容：解決問題的具體辦法

1）認真聽課，有問題向老師求助；

2）要有自信；

3) 與同學交流。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

adapt to；feel very sorry for sb.；take into consideration；believe in；communicate with；put your heart into；make some progress

第三步：連詞成句

1. Having received your letter in which you told me that you had trouble adapting to your math teacher, I feel very sorry for you.

2. it’s easy to change if you take my advice into consideration.

3. you’d better listen to the teacher carefully in class.

4. You can turn to your math teacher and ask your teacher to explain what you can not understand after class.

5. Confidence is very important.

6. You should be confident and believe in yourself.

7. You can communicate with your classmates and get some advice on maths.

8. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.

9. I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and make some progress in math.根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause (從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改